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<div>Got it. </div>
<div>I also need to add the Proximity-1 Space Data Link PICS Proforma discussion to the SLP WG Agenda.</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Cosby Matthew <<a href="mailto:MCOSBY@qinetiq.com">MCOSBY@qinetiq.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Thursday, September 19, 2013 2:06 AM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</a>" <<a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</a>>, "Kazz, Greg J (313B)" <<a href="mailto:greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov">greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>CCSDS Secretariat <<a href="mailto:tomg@aiaa.org">tomg@aiaa.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>RE: UC Quick comments for PICS: [Sls-slp] Proximity-1 DataLink Specification for final SLP WG review<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Greg,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I agree with Gian Paolo on his points on section 5.4.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I think we should have:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">- DLL-64 / 5.4.2.4 Mandatory if DLL-62 Supported<o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Tom will need to advise on how we represent that.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I would also suggest that we delete:
</span><i><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">(notional)</span></i><span style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Hope to see you all in Texas.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; color: rgb(31, 73, 125); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Cheers, Matt.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size: 10pt; color: navy; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Matthew Cosby<br>
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<a href="mailto:sls-slp-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-slp-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a> [<a href="mailto:sls-slp-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">mailto:sls-slp-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b><a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</a><br>
<b>Sent:</b> 04 September 2013 09:16<br>
<b>To:</b> Kazz, Greg J (313B)<br>
<b>Cc:</b> CCSDS Secretariat; <a href="mailto:sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: Quick comments for PICS: [Sls-slp] Proximity-1 DataLink Specification for final SLP WG review<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Greg,</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "> Just about DLL-1.</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">DLL-1 should be removed if it refer to section 3.2.</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Making DLL-1 to refer to 3.2.1 (instead of 3.2) makes the second comment superseded.</span><br>
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<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">I am not sure I agree about your view of section 5.4 and I would rather use "conditional items" also because as far as I see this is the only case (i.e. no big burden implied). However we can go
Pink with the present form (except the corrections you agreed) and discuss the matter in San Antonio to generate RIDs (if needed).</span><br>
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<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">One more comment: DLL-60 says "Time Correlation Process (notional)".</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">The term notional is mentioned only once in the document (i.e. here).</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Should its meaning in PICS context be clarified (or alternatively deleted)?</span><br>
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<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Ciao</span> <br>
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<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Gian Paolo</span><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 7.5pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">"Kazz, Greg J (313B)" <<a href="mailto:greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov">greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 7.5pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">"<a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</a>" <<a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</a>>, "<a href="mailto:sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-slp@mailman.ccsds.org</a>"
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 7.5pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">CCSDS Secretariat <<a href="mailto:tomg@aiaa.org">tomg@aiaa.org</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 7.5pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Re: Quick comments for PICS: [Sls-slp] Proximity-1 Data Link Specification for final SLP WG review</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">G.P.</span> <br>
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<span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Thanks for your comments!</span><br>
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<span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">My answers are in **…. ** below.</span><br>
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<span style="font-size: 7.5pt; color: rgb(0, 64, 128); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Greg Kazz</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 7.5pt; color: rgb(0, 64, 128); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">EEISE Group Supervisor</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(0, 64, 128); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Systems Engineering Section (Section 313)</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(0, 64, 128); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Jet Propulsion Laboratory</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(0, 64, 128); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">4800 Oak Grove Drive, Pasadena CA 91109</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(0, 64, 128); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">MS 301-490</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 10pt; color: rgb(0, 64, 128); font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">(818) 393-6529 (office)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">From: </span>
</b><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">"</span><a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">"
<</span><a href="mailto:Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">><b><br>
Date: </b>Tuesday, September 3, 2013 3:59 AM<b><br>
To: </b>"Kazz, Greg J (313B)" <</span><a href="mailto:greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">greg.j.kazz@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">><b><br>
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<span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">A few very quick comments.</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "></span><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><br>
Of course there may be more for similar cases.</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><br>
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regards</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">
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A2.2 PICS</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "></span><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><br>
Should DLL-1 better refer to 3.2.1 instead of 3.2?</span> <br>
<span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">** Yes 3.2.1 **</span><br>
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DLL-1 should be removed as individual subsections of 3.2 are addressed and moreover DLL-1 as it stands now is incorrect/confusing as it includes also options?</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">** We need users to comply with both 3.2.1 and 3.2.2. The subparts of 3.2.2. are useful to see because they contain valid values associated with these parameters. **</span><br>
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Why the description of Option 1 is with lower case o (i.e. o.1 instead of O.1 as in the table)? ** I think it was a typo. It was corrected as all capital letters in my version **<br>
Why DLL-61 is in bold? (this is not the only one in bold...) ** I think this is Tom's way of showing a heading. **</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><br>
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Is it correct to mark all the items within e.g. 5.4 as optional? **<b> </b>Yes that was deliberately done by the WG **<br>
If you read section 5.4, it contains mandatory requirements and options.<br>
This was actually a case for conditional items as follows:<br>
- DLL-63 / 5.4.2.1 Optional</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "></span><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><br>
- DLL-64 / 5.4.2.4 Mandatory if DLL-62 Supported<br>
Is it correct giving up about conditional items in PICS? ** In this case, yes **</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><br>
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DLL-61 / 5.4 should not be listed as the individual requirements are listed<br>
DLL-63 should refer to 5.4.2.1 and not to 5.4.2 ** I agree, DLL-63 refers to 5.4.2.1 **<br>
As section 5.4 is written, it is not visible that this feature is optional ==> should 5.4.1 be made optional? **<b></b>yes **</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><br>
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PICS take - as expected - several pages.</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "></span><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; "><br>
Why not shortening some cases as e.g. DLL-52 / 5.2 ?<br>
In other words why not having only a row for DLL-52 and removing the 8 following rows?<br>
Alternatively why not indenting the following 8 row and using identifiers as DLL-52.x?</span><span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><br>
**<b> </b>Up to Tom Gannett how best to deal with indexing or showing subsets of information within the PICS **</span><br>
<span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">** We could shorten the DLL PICS, however I tried to strike a compromise between the shortest PICS Proforma possible vs conveying some redundancy that helps the user check through the items
by listing the key ones in detail. If I hide too much information, people might have the tendency to forget about it. Explicitly listing it (but not regurgatating the entire text) seemed to be the best compromise **</span><br>
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<span style="font-size: 13.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">**Thoughts from other SLP WG members ??? **</span><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 7.5pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">Thomas Gannett <</span><a href="mailto:tomg@aiaa.org"><span style="font-size: 7.5pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">tomg@aiaa.org</span></a><span style="font-size: 7.5pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; ">></span><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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Dear SLP WG members, <br>
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Tom Gannett has provided us now with a pre-approval version for the CESG of the Proximity-1 Space Data Link Protocol.<br>
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Please review the attached documents and send me and Tom any comments you have (redlines of the clean version would work, if you have the bandwidth to send a 20 Megabyte file !) to me and Tom by Sept. 13.<br>
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There are two files in the CWE directory below. One is a red-lined version so that you can see the changes made and also a clean version.<br>
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Best regards, <br>
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