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<div>Dear All,</div>
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<div>I have responded to the edits and comments of both Marjorie and Ignazio based upon their latest edits to the TC Space Data Link Protocol with SDLS.</div>
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<div>Please see the following URL that contains proposed changes to both TC and AOS. (TM will follow essentially the same types of changes as AOS, so after we have consensus, I will modify TM.)</div>
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<div><b><b><a href="http://tinyurl.com/mo6m5sl">http://tinyurl.com/mo6m5sl</a></b></b></div>
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<div>Your Figure 6-c Marjorie in the TC book is quite innovative. You have also clearly identified all the processes and functions involved in the TC SDLS case. Under the Notes in Section 6.3.7, I had to change the reference to 6.3.2 since the order of processing
for SDLS does not follow Section 4.3.5 (which was correctly called out in the text of 6.3.2). </div>
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<div>I decided not to include any figure such as 6c in the AOS book, simply because the COP-1 is not an issue for AOS and we are only dealing with the order of processing of the AOS functions and SDLS, which I believe is handled easily with text. I added a
section "Error Reporting" to discuss the verification issues in lieu of the order of processing discussion in TC.</div>
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<div>For both documents in Section 6.4.2, I softened the text to say that the Virtual Channel Reception Fct will not deliver (in lieu of discard ) the frame if SDLS reports an error. In my mind, I want to prohibit the function from delivering the frame to the
user, but not prohibit the capability for future forensic analysis by a select group of analysts. I think this best adresses Ignazio's concerns and questions. (Change also added to AOS).</div>
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<div>Please let me know if the text for both TC and AOS is now consistent and acceptable. If so, I will procede to make the changes to TM as well.</div>
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<div>Best regards,</div>
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<div>Greg </div>
<div>Chairman SLS-SLP WG</div>
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