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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">just a few comments concerning the documents Greg sent around.</p>
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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">I´m absolutely fine with Greg`s proposals - please find below some mainly editorial remarks:</p>
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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">132x0p11[final]_TM_NEW_SECTION:</p>
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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">- page 1-2, section 1.5 Document Structure: don`t forget the new section 6</p>
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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">- page 1-5, section 1.7 References: the titel of reference [8] should be written in italics</p>
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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">- page 6-4, section 6.1.2: "reference" should be written in lower case</p>
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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">355x0r2_final_SDLD_GJK:</p>
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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">- page 1-6, section 1.8 References: the titel of reference [6] should be written in italics</p>
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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">- page 5-2, Figure 5-1 (respectively Figure 5-2 and Figure 5-3 on the following pages): <span style=" text-decoration: underline;">This is basically a comment for the SDLS colleagues.</span> </p>
<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">The figure tells us that the "MAC is computed over Primary Header, Secondary Header, Security Header and Frame Data". Isn`t this a bit misleading as with using the authentication bit mask we will - in most cases - compute the MAC only over certain fields of the Primary Header, the Security Header and the Frame Data Field - but not over the Secondary Header and the "rest" of the Primary Header. I think we should consider to re-design this figures.</p>
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<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">Best regards and have a nice weekend, </p>
<p style=" margin-top:0px; margin-bottom:0px; margin-left:0px; margin-right:0px; -qt-block-indent:0; text-indent:0px; -qt-user-state:0;">Dorothea</p></body></html>