REVIEW ITEM DISPOSITION (RID): RED BOOK RID INITIATION FORM AGENCY RID NUMBER: JAXA-RPA830-05 SUBMITTING ORGANIZATION (Agency, Center): JAXA ------------------------------------------------------------------ REVIEWER'S NAME: Shigeyuki Furushima CODE: Mitsubishi Electric Corporation E-MAIL ADDRESS: jaxa.ccsds@jaxa.jp TELEPHONE: +81-29-868-2587 ------------------------------------------------------------------ DOCUMENT NUMBER: CCSDS 732.0-P-2.1 Pink Sheets, Issue 2.1 DOCUMENT NAME: AOS Space Data Link Protocol DATE ISSUED: December 2008 PAGE NUMBER: 2-6 PARAGRAPH NUMBER: 2.2.3.1 Table 2-1 RID SHORT TITLE: The cange from "Packet Service" to "Virtual Channel Packet Service" (2) ------------------------------------------------------------------ DESCRIPTION OF REQUESTED CHANGE: (Use From: "..." To "..." format) In section 2.2.3.1 Table 2-1, the pink sheet says "The term ePacket Servicef is used as an abbreviation for Virtual Channel Packet (VCP) Service." However, CCSDS232.0-B-1(CCSDS TC Space Data Link Protocol) doesn't have this definition. It means ,in the CCSDS TC Space Data Link Protocol, "Virtual Channel Packet Service" has 1 nominal designation, however, In CCSDS TM Space Data Link Protocol and CCSDS AOS Space Data Link Protocol, It is called both "Virtual Channel Packet Service" and "Packet Service." This change will give rise to the confusion. ------------------------------------------------------------------ CATEGORY OF REQUESTED CHANGE: Technical Fact ___ Recommended _X_ Editorial ___ NOTES: TECHNICAL FACT: Major technical change of sufficient magnitude as to render the Recommendation inaccurate and unacceptable if not corrected. (Supporting analysis/rationale is essential.) RECOMMENDED: Change of a nature that would, if incorporated, produce a marked improvement in document quality and acceptance. EDITORIAL: Typographical or other factual error needing correction. (This type of change will be made without feedback to submitter.) ------------------------------------------------------------------ SUPPORTING ANALYSIS: ------------------------------------------------------------------ DISPOSITION: Not Accepted. The shortened form was used to fit the table into the document. The note explains the complete term.