<span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Dear Jim,</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">thanks for the
document. I noted that there is only one revision, the deletion of recommends
8 explained with a comment:</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Times New Roman"><b>DDOR WG
thinks recommends (8) should be deleted, since recommends (10) already
gives an absolute specification for P_DOR/No.  Telecom design
should have flexibility to select modulation index that meets (10) and
perhaps also allows for telemetry downlink.</b></span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">that does not
seem appropriate. Additionally, I noted that the version included as Annex
A contains instead recommends 8.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Can you please
check what happened?</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Thanks, Enrico</span>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">From:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Border,
James S (US 335D)" <james.s.border@jpl.nasa.gov></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">To:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"
<Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int>, "Volk, Christopher P (US 335D)"
<christopher.p.volk@jpl.nasa.gov></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Cc:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org"
<sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org>, "Javier.DeVicente@esa.int"
<Javier.DeVicente@esa.int></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Date:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">21/04/20
17:19</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Subject:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Re:
[EXTERNAL] SLS-RFM_20-04</span>
<br>
<hr noshade>
<br>
<br>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">Enrico,</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">Here
is a version W-2 of the Recommendation 2.5.7B that shows the revision marks
from the Input Paper presented last Fall.</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">Regards,</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">Jim</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"><b>From:
</b>"Vassallo.Enrico" <Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int><b><br>
Date: </b>Tuesday, April 21, 2020 at 5:19 AM<b><br>
To: </b>Christopher Volk <christopher.p.volk@jpl.nasa.gov>, James
Border <james.s.border@jpl.nasa.gov><b><br>
Cc: </b>"sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org" <sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org>,
"Javier.DeVicente@esa.int" <Javier.DeVicente@esa.int><b><br>
Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] SLS-RFM_20-04</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial">Dear
Christopher and Jim,</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
<br>
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
could you send out a version of this document showing the rev marks in
Appendix A with respect to the previous version? This is the normal modus
operandi of the RFM WG. Alternatively, you can just send REC 2.5.7B (version
White XX) as stand alone doc with the needed rev marks (strikethrough for
deletion, underline for addition).</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
<br>
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
Thanks, Enrico</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span></p>
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