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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Thank you for your feedback Massimo.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Don’t forget to compute the values in bps/Hz taking into account the roll-off then.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Page 1-1: “ … with modulations ranging from QPSK to 8PSK and 16-, 32- and 64-APSK, and spectral efficiencies up to
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Page 2-3: “ It also allows to select several coding rates for each constellation, hence the efficiency can change from
a minimum of 0.71 bit/symbol, to a maximum of <b>5.39 bit/symbol</b>.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Clément<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>Envoyé :</b> lundi 18 juin 2018 18:12<br>
<b>À :</b> Dudal Clement <Clement.Dudal@cnes.fr><br>
<b>Cc :</b> Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int; Jon Hamkins <Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu>; Ken Andrews <Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov>; Space Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group <sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org>; sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Objet :</b> RE: [Sls-rfm] [SLS-CC] 130.11-G (SCCC Green Book), for WG review - deadline for comments: 16 June 2018<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Thank you for your comments, Clément, my answer inline in Green</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Massimo</span> <br>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">From: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Dudal Clement <<a href="mailto:Clement.Dudal@cnes.fr">Clement.Dudal@cnes.fr</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">To: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"<a href="mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</a>" <<a href="mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Cc: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"<a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</a>>,
Ken Andrews <<a href="mailto:Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov">Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>, "Space Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group" <<a href="mailto:sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org</a>>, Jon Hamkins <<a href="mailto:Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu">Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu</a>>,
"<a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</a>" <<a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Date: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">15-06-18 06:13 PM</span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Subject: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">RE: [Sls-rfm] [SLS-CC] 130.11-G (SCCC Green Book), for WG review - deadline for comments: 16 June
2018</span> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#004080">Dear Massimo,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#004080">Just a couple of comments on the GB</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#004080">p.vii, the spectral efficiency is expressend in bps/Hz.<br>
p.2-3 and 2-4 the spectral efficiency is expressed in bit/symbol. <br>
What is the roll-off factor used to compute the spectral efficiency in bps/Hz? A coherency for the spectral efficiency unit would be better.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p style="margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:green">[MB] We'll try to align the use as much as possible, even if, in different sections, we refer to different definitions: in 2-3 and 2-4, we
talk explicitly of bits/symbol, while</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p style="margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:green"> bps/Hz is appropriate when discussing the BW (for which, 0.2 and 0.35 roll-off were assumed)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#004080">Chapter 4.3.3 deals with the occupied bandwidth.<br>
A BW is defined for the optimal IBO after filtering with and without predistorison. The computation of the corresponding spectral efficiencies with respect to the ones given in Table 2-1 would be useful for performance estimation (for instance in Tables 6-1
and 6-2).</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:green">[MB] We'll see what we can do without distorting too much (putting too much information into) the table
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<p style="margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#004080">Best regards</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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Envoyé :</b> mercredi 6 juin 2018 15:56<b><br>
À :</b> <a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</a><b><br>
Cc :</b> <a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</a>; Ken Andrews <<a href="mailto:Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov">Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>; Space Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group <<a href="mailto:sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org</a>>;
Jon Hamkins <<a href="mailto:Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu">Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu</a>><b><br>
Objet :</b> Re: [Sls-rfm] [SLS-CC] 130.11-G (SCCC Green Book), for WG review - deadline for comments: 16 June 2018</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p style="margin:0cm;margin-bottom:.0001pt"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Thank you Enrico,</span>
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we'll deal with the comments shortly (we are waiting for the deadline to avoid duplications).</span>
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I confirm we'll remove all the normative material already in the Blue Book (your point 4), but possible also the 3))</span>
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1) ok</span> <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
2) ok</span> <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
3) see above, I'd rather remove normative material</span> <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">
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4) ok</span> <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
5) ok</span> <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
6) ok for the proposed change. We'll add more detail about the filter (bandpass, stopband...), which is the one that was agreed in the past for simulations</span>
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7) it should be feasible</span> <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">
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8) they seem ok in the pdf and word file. We used equation editor. We'll hand over the original figures to Tom</span>
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9) with RF filtering. We'll add the information</span> <br>
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Best regards,</span> <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">
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Massimo</span> <span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><br>
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From: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA</span>
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To: </span><a href="mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</span></a>
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Cc: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Ken Andrews <</span><a href="mailto:Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
Space Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group <</span><a href="mailto:sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
Jon Hamkins <</span><a href="mailto:Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">>,
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Date: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">06-06-18 03:37 PM</span>
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Subject: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Re: [SLS-CC] 130.11-G (SCCC Green Book), for WG review - deadline for comments: 16 June 2018</span>
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Dear Massimo,</span> <br>
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please find below some comments of mine.</span> <br>
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Regards, Enrico</span> <br>
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1) Title of sections 3 and 4</span> <br>
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I would add "(ideal synchronization)" at the end to distinguish from section 6.</span>
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2) Section 1,1, Jon's comment on Earth Observation missions</span> <br>
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I think you should use the ITU terminology: Earth Exploration-Satellite Service missions.</span>
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3) Figure 2-6</span> <br>
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You should use the figures from ref [11] instead that look better and avoid the issues raised by Wai already with the previous version of this document.</span>
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4) Table 2-2</span> <br>
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I think that this normative text is included in [11]. Please confirm.</span> <br>
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5) Figures 3-1 and 3-2</span> <br>
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Add "uncoded" to the captions.</span> <br>
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6) Section 4.1</span> <br>
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The last para starting with "For all simulations .." should appear before the previous sentence making reference to figure 4-3 since these data are necessary to interpret the figure. Is there anything else we can say here about the elliptic filter? I mean,
is 5th order enough to get the plot of figure 4-3?</span> <br>
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7) Figures 4-19 and 4-20</span> <br>
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Reduce the Y-axis scale to 1.5 from 2.6 so that differences can be appreciated.</span>
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8) Equations and figures in 5.2, 5.5 and 5.6</span> <br>
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Some of them appear of low quality on my printouts. Could be my printer. Be prepared to get nice originals requests by Tom.</span>
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9) Tables 6-1 and 6-2</span> <br>
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Is the bandwidth with or w/o RF filter? Please add this info.</span> <br>
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From: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Jon Hamkins <</span><a href="mailto:Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">></span>
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To: </span><a href="mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">, Space Link Coding & Synchronization
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Cc: </span><a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">, Ken Andrews <</span><a href="mailto:Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">></span>
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Date: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">05/05/2018 02:05</span>
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Massimo,<br>
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Attached are my comments on the SCCC Green Book. Not having the Word <br>
version, I found it easiest to mark it by hand. Most of the comments <br>
relate to English usage, which I hope you will consider, but there are <br>
many technical comments as well.<br>
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----Jon<br>
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On 4/16/2018 7:30 AM, </span><a href="mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</span></a><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New""> wrote:<br>
> Dear all,<br>
> <br>
> as per AI_18_02 from our Gaithersburg meeting, I update the SCCC Green <br>
> Book including (section 7) the measured phase noise, at 26.25 GHz, with <br>
> the modulator (EM) used<br>
> in the testing.<br>
> With this, the book is ready for WG review and your comments are due in <br>
> 2 months, that is by 16 June.<br>
> <br>
> Thank you for your cooperation.<br>
> Best regards,<br>
> Massimo<br>
> <br>
> <br>
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