<span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Thank you Enrico,</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">we'll deal with
the comments shortly (we are waiting for the deadline to avoid duplications).</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">I confirm we'll
remove all the normative material already in the Blue Book  (your
point 4), but possible also the 3))</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">1) ok</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">2) ok</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">3) see above,
I'd rather remove normative material</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">4) ok</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">5) ok</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">6) ok for the
proposed change. We'll add more detail about the filter (bandpass, stopband...),
which is the one that was agreed in the past for simulations</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">7) it should be
feasible</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">8) they seem ok
in the pdf and word file. We used equation editor. We'll hand over the
original figures to Tom</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">9) with RF filtering.
We'll add the information</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Best regards,</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Massimo</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
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Communication Systems Engineer<br>
ESA/Estec<br>
<br>
Tel. +31 (0)71 5653435<br>
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<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">From:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Enrico
Vassallo/esoc/ESA</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">To:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Cc:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Ken
Andrews <Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov>, Space Link Coding &
Synchronization Working Group <sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org>, Jon Hamkins
<Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu>, sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Date:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">06-06-18
03:37 PM</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Subject:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Re:
[SLS-CC] 130.11-G (SCCC Green Book), for WG review - deadline for comments:
16 June 2018</span>
<br>
<hr noshade>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Dear Massimo,</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">please find below
some comments of mine.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Regards, Enrico</span>
<br>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">---------------------------------------------------------------------------</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">1) Title of sections
3 and 4</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">I would add "(ideal
synchronization)" at the end to distinguish from section 6.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">2) Section 1,1,
Jon's comment on Earth Observation missions</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">I think you should
use the ITU terminology: Earth Exploration-Satellite Service missions.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">3) Figure 2-6</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">You should use
the figures from ref [11] instead that look better and avoid the issues
raised by Wai already with the previous version of this document.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">4) Table 2-2</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">I think that this
normative text is included in [11]. Please confirm.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">5) Figures 3-1
and 3-2</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Add "uncoded"
to the captions.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">6) Section 4.1</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">The last para
starting with "For all simulations .." should appear before the
previous sentence making reference to figure 4-3 since these data are necessary
to interpret the figure. Is there anything else we can say here about the
elliptic filter? I mean, is 5th order enough to get the plot of figure
4-3?</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">7) Figures 4-19
and 4-20</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Reduce the Y-axis
scale to 1.5 from 2.6 so that differences can be appreciated.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">8) Equations and
figures in 5.2, 5.5 and 5.6</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Some of them appear
of low quality on my printouts. Could be my printer. Be prepared to get
nice originals requests by Tom.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">9) Tables 6-1
and 6-2</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Is the bandwidth
with or w/o RF filter? Please add this info.</span>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">From:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Jon
Hamkins <Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">To:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int,
Space Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group <sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Cc:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int,
Ken Andrews <Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Date:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">05/05/2018
02:05</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Subject:
       </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Re:
[SLS-CC] 130.11-G (SCCC Green Book), for WG review - deadline for comments:
16 June 2018</span>
<br>
<hr noshade>
<br>
<br><tt><span style=" font-size:10pt">[attachment "130.11-G-Hamkins-comments.pdf"
deleted by Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA] </span></tt>
<br>
<br><tt><span style=" font-size:10pt">Massimo,<br>
<br>
Attached are my comments on the SCCC Green Book.  Not having the Word
<br>
version, I found it easiest to mark it by hand.  Most of the comments
<br>
relate to English usage, which I hope you will consider, but there are
<br>
many technical comments as well.<br>
<br>
      ----Jon<br>
<br>
On 4/16/2018 7:30 AM, Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int wrote:<br>
> Dear all,<br>
> <br>
> as per AI_18_02 from our Gaithersburg meeting, I update the SCCC Green
<br>
> Book including (section 7) the measured phase noise, at 26.25 GHz,
with <br>
> the modulator (EM) used<br>
> in the testing.<br>
> With this, the book is ready for WG review and your comments are due
in <br>
> 2 months, that is by 16 June.<br>
> <br>
> Thank you for your cooperation.<br>
> Best regards,<br>
> Massimo<br>
> <br>
> <br>
> <br>
> ---------------------------------------------------<br>
> Massimo Bertinelli<br>
> Communication Systems Engineer<br>
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> <br>
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