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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Aaron,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I read through the 123 GB and have some minor edits and comments. I upload my changes to :<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/sls/docs/SLS-MHDC/CWE%20Private/123.1-B/GreenBook/120x2g2-2021.08.10-clean_wong.docx?d=w40539e51ae6641d391d5cd8d07655058">https://cwe.ccsds.org/sls/docs/SLS-MHDC/CWE%20Private/123.1-B/GreenBook/120x2g2-2021.08.10-clean_wong.docx?d=w40539e51ae6641d391d5cd8d07655058</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Some of the things that might need your attention are:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">Section 4.2.1.1: seems to be missing a table<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">Section 4.2.2: I did some editing of the sentences in Page 4-12. Please make sure my edits are correct.<o:p></o:p></li></ol>
<p class="MsoList" style="mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2"><![if !supportLists]><span style="mso-list:Ignore">3.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span><![endif]>Section 5.8.3.6: page 5-21, is the statement “When sample-adaptive or hybrid encoding is used, compression effectiveness does not depend on sample encoding order. “ a true statement?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoList">Best,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoList">Mark<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Mark Wong</span></i></b><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">,<b>
</b></span></i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Ph.D.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">NASA/Goddard Space Flight Center
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Flight Microwave & Telecommunication Systems Branch/Code 567<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Greenbelt, MD 20771<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">B19 Rm S030<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:8.0pt;font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Phone: 1-301-286-6549
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