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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear Tom, et al,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">With the exception of the changes to Figure 2-1 that Andrea requested of you, but that have not yet been made, all other changes to this document that I believe were required have been made. Therefore, you have my explicit agreement to
proceed.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards, Peter<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Tom Gannett <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, April 18, 2023 at 11:22 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Peter Shames <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Cc: </b>Ignacio Sanchez-Aguillar <Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int>, "sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org" <sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org>, Gilles Moury <Gilles.Moury@cnes.fr>, 'Andrea Modenini' <Andrea.Modenini@esa.int><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] RE: CESG-P-2023-01-002 Approval to publish CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Peter: Since I do not have the referenced correspondence, please indicate by return email whether the attached update satisfies your conditions. —Tom<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif;color:#1F497D">Logothete, L.L.C.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif;color:#1F497D">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif"> Andrea Modenini [mailto:Andrea.Modenini@esa.int]
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<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, April 18, 2023 3:46 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Thomas Gannett<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Ignacio Aguilar Sanchez; sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org; Moury Gilles<br>
<b>Subject:</b> FW: CESG-P-2023-01-002 Approval to publish CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Dear Tom,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">I hope this finds you well.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">With reference to CESG-P-2023-01-002 comments, please find in attachment the Word file of the SCCC Green Book with the agreed changes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Changes are already done in the text in “track changes-mode”, except for a figure (see comment in the Word file) that requires a change of text label from you<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">I remain at your disposal <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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TT&C Communications Systems Engineer</span></b><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Tms Rmn",serif"> </span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif;color:gray"><br>
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RF Systems Division<b><br>
European Space Agency, ESTEC</b><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> SLS-CC <sls-cc-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> <b>On Behalf Of
</b>Andrea Modenini via SLS-CC<br>
<b>Sent:</b> 10 March 2023 09:34<br>
<b>To:</b> sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org; Lee, Dennis K (US 332G) <dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [SLS-CC] FW: CESG-P-2023-01-002 Approval to publish CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2)<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">Dear WG,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">In response to the CESG pool (email below), I prepared a new version of 130x11g (docx file) that replies to the comments of SEA (pdf file).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">SEA did already a preliminary check, and confirmed that changes satisfies the conditions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">Before sending the document to SLS and Secretariat, could you please let me know if you have any objection with the changes by Thursday 16th, EOB?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">Deadline is short, but changes are really a few.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">PS: <a id="OWAAMDF8BD68EB1414E199B5E5BF9ABD5A0CF" href="mailto:dennis.k.lee@jpl.nasa.gov">
<span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;text-decoration:none">@Lee, Dennis K (US 332G)</span></a>, being a shared book, I guess we need also RFM consensus<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Ph.D. Andrea Modenini<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">TT&C Communications Systems Engineer <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">TT&C and PDT Systems & Techniques Section (TEC-EST)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">RF Systems Division<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">European Space Agency, ESTEC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Keplerlaan 1, PO Box 299<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">NL-2200 AG Noordwijk, The Netherlands<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">-----Original Message-----<br>
From: CCSDS Secretariat <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>
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Sent: 10 February 2023 23:58<br>
To: Andrea Modenini <<a href="mailto:Andrea.Modenini@esa.int">Andrea.Modenini@esa.int</a>>; Massimo Bertinelli <<a href="mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</a>><br>
Cc: <a href="mailto:Peter.M.Shames@jpl.nasa.gov">Peter.M.Shames@jpl.nasa.gov</a><br>
Subject: Re: CESG-P-2023-01-002 Approval to publish CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2)</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">Dear Document Rapporteur,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">The CESG poll to approve publication of CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2) concluded with conditions. Please negotiate disposition of the conditions directly with the
AD(s) who voted to approve with conditions and CC the Secretariat on all related correspondence.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">CESG E-Poll Identifier: CESG-P-2023-01-002 Approval to publish CCSDS 130.11-G-2, SCCC—Summary of Definition and Performance (Green Book, Issue 2)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">Results of CESG poll beginning 26 January 2023 and ending 9 February 2023:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"> Abstain: 1 (14.29%) (Duhaze)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"> Approve Unconditionally: 5 (71.43%) (Barkley, Merri, Cola, Aguilar Sanchez, Wilmot)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"> Approve with Conditions: 1 (14.29%) (Shames)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"> Disapprove with Comment: 0 (0%) <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">CONDITIONS/COMMENTS:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"> Erik Barkley (Approve Unconditionally): A minor comment, not a condition -- a suggestion for improved presentation re Figure 3-1 and 3-2: Perhaps a subgraph with a different scale could be considered – as presented
for figure 3-1, all the blue lines are hard to distinguish. The main message is apparent but the distinctions among ACM13 - 17 tend to get lost. There is a similar consideration with regard to the orange lines in figure 3 – 2.
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"> Peter Shames (Approve with Conditions): This document makes heavy reference to the actual standard. As such it is almost as if the reader needs to read the standard first, and then this "description", I noted
a numder of editorial changes for clarification in the body of the text. They are for clarity and do not make any substantive changes to the body of the document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB"> Jonathan Wilmot (Approve Unconditionally): This book does read as though it was a user's guide for the standard. This is different than most Green books but I think it is reasonable to do it this way.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">Total Respondents: 7<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">All Areas responded to this question.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">SECRETARIAT INTERPRETATION OF RESULTS: Approved with Conditions<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-GB">PROPOSED SECRETARIAT ACTION: Generate CMC poll after conditions have been addressed<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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