<span style=" font-size:12pt">Dear Ken,</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt"> thanks a lot for the good work.
I believe as well that this completes our action and the GB is ready for
publication.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">I kindly ask Ignacio to raise a resolution
for publication of 230.1-G-2.1 as in attachment, and put in CC Tom for
information.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">Thanks everybody,</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">Andrea</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span>
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<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">From:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Andrews,
Kenneth S (US 332B)" <kenneth.s.andrews@jpl.nasa.gov></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">To:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Andrea
Modenini (external)" <Andrea.Modenini@esa.int></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Cc:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Space
Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group" <sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org>,
"Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int" <Ignacio.Aguilar.Sanchez@esa.int></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Date:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">03-09-21
06:52</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Subject:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Re:
[SLS-CC] CCSDS 230.1-G-2.1 - Green Book TC - approved with comments - please
check deadline</span>
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<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">Andrea, </span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">Finally, an updated version of the TC
Green Book is attached, in both .docx and .pdf formats (showing change
tracking). The only change from the prior version, dated July 8,
is that I reverted the modifications that were intended to address point
2. This means that Section 10.1 now reads the same as it did prior
to the CESG poll, and I deleted references [8] and [9] again (which were
cited in Section 10.1 as references for CFDP and LTP). As for change
tracking, I took the time to accept each change that was caused by Microsoft’s
automatic renumbering. The result (I hope) is that the change tracking
now shows all human-made edits since the CESG poll, in a readable way.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">I believe this completes our action with
respect to the “Approve with Conditions” result from the CESG poll for
publication, and these changes can now go back to Tom Gannett for one more
update. After that, I don’t know if the CCSDS procedure is to get
Peter Shames’s concurrence (as the CESG member who imposed these conditions),
or to repeat the full CESG poll, or whether it can now proceed to the CMC
poll for publication.</span>
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<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">-Ken</span>
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<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">On Aug 19, 2021, at 6:46 AM, Andrea Modenini
(external) <</span><a href=mailto:Andrea.Modenini@esa.int><span style=" font-size:12pt;color:blue"><u>Andrea.Modenini@esa.int</u></span></a><span style=" font-size:12pt">>
wrote:</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Dear Ken,</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
following the comments we received, I believe we had WG consensus. All
points are accepted, except 2).</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
If you could please provide us an updated draft accordingly and then we
can ask for a SLS AD resolution. <br>
I guess it is sufficient to reject the edit in Section 10.1, but please
let me know.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
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</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
Thanks in advance,</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
Kind Regards</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
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From: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Andrea
Modenini/estec/ESA</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
To: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Space
Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group" <</span><a href="mailto:sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org"><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:blue;font-family:sans-serif"><u>sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org</u></span></a><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">></span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
Date: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">28-07-21
16:01</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
Subject: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">[SLS-CC]
CCSDS 230.1-G-2.1 - Green Book TC - approved with comments - please check
deadline</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
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<hr noshade><span style=" font-size:12pt"><br>
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Dear colleagues,</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
with reference to the Green Book of the TC, at CESG pool, we got an approval
with conditions from SEA AD, with the feedback below.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
Following discussion with the SLS AD and DAD, it was decided to re-iterate
such conditions at WG level.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
Kindly, Ken already took action to provide a draft of the TC Green Book
implementing such edits (see attachment).</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
<br>
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
I myself reviewed the comments: <br>
-Point 3, 4, and 5, look normal editorials.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
-point 1) is about including USLP. This appear in line with the Blue Book
review that we had recently</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
-point 2) implies instead the introduction of CFDP and LTP for TC. Personally
I am not aware that we had any discussion/input in the WG for allowing
the use of such protocols for TC, nor I see any content in the BlueBook.
<br>
If this is the case, my personal opinion would be to discard this last
point.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
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</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
Starting from this, could you please assess my conclusions and let me know
any disagreement no later than <b>13rd August EOB</b>?</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
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</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
In case deadline <b><u>does not fit</u></b> because of planned vacation,
please also let me know that I will consider an extension.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
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</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif"><br>
Kind Regards</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
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<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:10px"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Segoe UI"><i>It's
great that this doc is now being updated, given all of the changes in the
C&S WG and other SLS standards. I identify the following Issues:</i></span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:10px"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Segoe UI"><i>1)
There is no mention of USLP, expecially in the variable length frame mode.
Only TC is included. This must be fixed. Too many sections
to list.</i></span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:10px"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Segoe UI"><i>2)
In sec 10.3.3.1 (and 10.3.3.4) the only option described for handling "long
wait times" on deep space links is the repeat function. However,
equally viable methods are to use CFDP of even LTP to provide automated
file or link layer reliability. These should be addressed.</i></span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:10px"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Segoe UI"><i>3)
The term "CODEWORD", "Codeword", and "codeword"
are all used, sometimes in the same sentence. They look different
but apparently mean the same thing. Provide some description of this
early in the doc to avoid any possible confusion. Too many sections
to list.</i></span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:10px"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Segoe UI"><i>4)
In Glossary "codeword" is not really defined, just a reference
is provided. Fix this. Also, both encoding and decoding definitions
only mention BCH, not LDPC. Please fix this throughout.</i></span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:10px"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Segoe UI"><i>5)
There are many new scholarly references, which is fine. At least
one, [27], appears to have no reference identified in the body of the text.
Please fix this.</i></span></p>
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