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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Just a couple of comments on the GB<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">p.vii, the spectral efficiency is expressend in bps/Hz.<br>
p.2-3 and 2-4 the spectral efficiency is expressed in bit/symbol. <br>
What is the roll-off factor used to compute the spectral efficiency in bps/Hz? A coherency for the spectral efficiency unit would be better.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Chapter 4.3.3 deals with the occupied bandwidth.<br>
A BW is defined for the optimal IBO after filtering with and without predistorison. The computation of the corresponding spectral efficiencies with respect to the ones given in Table 2-1 would be useful for performance estimation (for instance in Tables 6-1
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">De :</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> SLS-RFM [mailto:sls-rfm-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org]
<b>De la part de</b> Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int<br>
<b>Envoyé :</b> mercredi 6 juin 2018 15:56<br>
<b>À :</b> Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int<br>
<b>Cc :</b> sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org; Ken Andrews <Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov>; Space Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group <sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org>; Jon Hamkins <Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu><br>
<b>Objet :</b> Re: [Sls-rfm] [SLS-CC] 130.11-G (SCCC Green Book), for WG review - deadline for comments: 16 June 2018<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Thank you Enrico,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">we'll deal with the comments shortly (we are waiting for the deadline to avoid duplications).</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">I confirm we'll remove all the normative material already in the Blue Book (your point 4), but possible also the 3))</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">1) ok</span> <br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">2) ok</span> <br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">3) see above, I'd rather remove normative material</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">4) ok</span> <br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">5) ok</span> <br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">6) ok for the proposed change. We'll add more detail about the filter (bandpass, stopband...), which is the one that was agreed in the past for simulations</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">7) it should be feasible</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">8) they seem ok in the pdf and word file. We used equation editor. We'll hand over the original figures to Tom</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">9) with RF filtering. We'll add the information</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Best regards,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Massimo</span> <br>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">From: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Enrico Vassallo/esoc/ESA</span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">To: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><a href="mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</a></span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Cc: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Ken Andrews <<a href="mailto:Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov">Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>, Space
Link Coding & Synchronization Working Group <<a href="mailto:sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org</a>>, Jon Hamkins <<a href="mailto:Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu">Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu</a>>,
<a href="mailto:sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-rfm@mailman.ccsds.org</a></span> <br>
<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Date: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">06-06-18 03:37 PM</span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Subject: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Re: [SLS-CC] 130.11-G (SCCC Green Book), for WG review - deadline for comments: 16 June 2018</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Dear Massimo,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Regards, Enrico</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">1) Title of sections 3 and 4</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">I would add "(ideal synchronization)" at the end to distinguish from section 6.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">2) Section 1,1, Jon's comment on Earth Observation missions</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">3) Figure 2-6</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">You should use the figures from ref [11] instead that look better and avoid the issues raised by Wai already with the previous version of this document.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">4) Table 2-2</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">I think that this normative text is included in [11]. Please confirm.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">5) Figures 3-1 and 3-2</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Add "uncoded" to the captions.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">6) Section 4.1</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">The last para starting with "For all simulations .." should appear before the previous sentence making reference to figure 4-3 since these data are necessary to interpret the figure. Is there anything
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">7) Figures 4-19 and 4-20</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Reduce the Y-axis scale to 1.5 from 2.6 so that differences can be appreciated.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">8) Equations and figures in 5.2, 5.5 and 5.6</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Some of them appear of low quality on my printouts. Could be my printer. Be prepared to get nice originals requests by Tom.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">9) Tables 6-1 and 6-2</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Is the bandwidth with or w/o RF filter? Please add this info.</span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">From: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Jon Hamkins <<a href="mailto:Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu">Jon.Hamkins@jpl.caltech.edu</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">To: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><a href="mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</a>, Space Link Coding & Synchronization
Working Group <<a href="mailto:sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org">sls-cc@mailman.ccsds.org</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Cc: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif"><a href="mailto:Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int">Enrico.Vassallo@esa.int</a>, Ken Andrews <<a href="mailto:Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov">Kenneth.S.Andrews@jpl.nasa.gov</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Date: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">05/05/2018 02:05</span>
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<span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Subject: </span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Re: [SLS-CC] 130.11-G (SCCC Green Book), for WG review - deadline for comments: 16 June 2018</span>
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<tt><span style="font-size:10.0pt">Massimo,</span></tt><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New""><br>
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<tt>Attached are my comments on the SCCC Green Book. Not having the Word </tt><br>
<tt>version, I found it easiest to mark it by hand. Most of the comments </tt><br>
<tt>relate to English usage, which I hope you will consider, but there are </tt><br>
<tt>many technical comments as well.</tt><br>
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<tt>On 4/16/2018 7:30 AM, <a href="mailto:Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int">Massimo.Bertinelli@esa.int</a> wrote:</tt><br>
<tt>> Dear all,</tt><br>
<tt>> </tt><br>
<tt>> as per AI_18_02 from our Gaithersburg meeting, I update the SCCC Green </tt>
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<tt>> Book including (section 7) the measured phase noise, at 26.25 GHz, with </tt>
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<tt>> the modulator (EM) used</tt><br>
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<tt>> With this, the book is ready for WG review and your comments are due in </tt>
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<tt>> 2 months, that is by 16 June.</tt><br>
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<tt>> Thank you for your cooperation.</tt><br>
<tt>> Best regards,</tt><br>
<tt>> Massimo</tt><br>
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