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<p class="MsoNormal">All,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">A couple of editorial comments, and a potential mistake in one of the sentences in Section 3.10.5. I tried to use Word Online but failed, so see attached.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-ligatures:none">Marc Sanchez Net (332H)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:gray;mso-ligatures:none">Telecommunications Engineer</span><span style="mso-ligatures:none"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:gray;mso-ligatures:none">Jet Propulsion Laboratory<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:gray;mso-ligatures:none">Cell:</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#222222;mso-ligatures:none"> </span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black;mso-ligatures:none"><a href="mailto:(617)%20953-7977">(617)
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</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:gray;mso-ligatures:none">Email:</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#222222;mso-ligatures:none"> </span><span style="color:black;mso-ligatures:none"><a href="mailto:marc.sanchez.net@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:blue">marc.sanchez.net@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a></span><span style="font-size:9.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#222222;mso-ligatures:none"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="mso-ligatures:none">From:</span></b><span style="mso-ligatures:none"> SIS-DTN <sis-dtn-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Robert C Durst via SIS-DTN<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, July 13, 2023 10:12 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> sis-dtn@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] [Sis-dtn] WG LAST CALL on LTP Corrigendum and status of BPv7 RID Review<br>
<b>Importance:</b> High<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">All, <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks to all who were able to dial in to today’s SIS-DTN meeting. We got a lot done. There are two topics I need to address in this email:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">LTP Corrigendum finalization and submission<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">BPv7 RID Resolution<o:p></o:p></li></ol>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>LTP Corrigendum<o:p></o:p></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">The group on today’s call feels that the draft LTP Corrigendum is ready to submit as the response to the LTP 5-year renewal. To that end, this email serves as the DTN Working Group LAST CALL for comments on the LTP Corrigendum. Please
look at the current draft document via the link below (NOTE: it is MUCH easier to download the document to your computer and open it locally in Word than to attempt to view it in a browser). If you have any comments, please submit them via email to this
list no later than 11am EDT next Thursday, 7/20/2023. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">The draft corrigendum is here: <a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/sis/docs/SIS-DTN/Draft%20Documents/LTP%20Update%202021/734x1b1_final_w_draft_corrigendum_kls.docx?d=w81a548c08f3e47198a8e3545c49a9547">
https://cwe.ccsds.org/sis/docs/SIS-DTN/Draft%20Documents/LTP%20Update%202021/734x1b1_final_w_draft_corrigendum_kls.docx?d=w81a548c08f3e47198a8e3545c49a9547</a><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>BPv7 RID Resolution<o:p></o:p></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">The group on today’s call reviewed and dispositioned RIDs on rows 2-22 of the spreadsheet below. The draft revisions to the document are in column K (“Discussion”). There are 102 total RIDs; we have discussed 56 of them so far. We hope
to complete discussion of the final 46 next week, but 21 RIDs took a bit over an hour this week, so that may be ambitious. Still, ideally we would complete reviewing these next week, because we still need to incorporate the decisions into the document and
get it to Tomaso. If you can spare time to review the remaining RIDs in advance of our telecon it will make the discussion proceed more quickly.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">RID spreadsheet is here:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/sis/docs/SIS-DTN/Draft%20Documents/BPv7%20for%20CCSDS/Agency%20Review%20June%202023/Copy%20of%20BPv7%20Agency%20Review%20RIDS%2020230613.xlsx?d=wb956ec5753424fed8cf0b1b930fb9f92">https://cwe.ccsds.org/sis/docs/SIS-DTN/Draft%20Documents/BPv7%20for%20CCSDS/Agency%20Review%20June%202023/Copy%20of%20BPv7%20Agency%20Review%20RIDS%2020230613.xlsx?d=wb956ec5753424fed8cf0b1b930fb9f92</a><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Draft document is here:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/sis/_layouts/15/WopiFrame.aspx?sourcedoc=%7bD2540C3F-D274-4FF9-9097-90F3642B7023%7d&file=LTPv2%20White%20Book%2028.04.2023_for%20CCSDS%20Review.doc&action=default">https://cwe.ccsds.org/sis/_layouts/15/WopiFrame.aspx?sourcedoc={D2540C3F-D274-4FF9-9097-90F3642B7023}&file=LTPv2%20White%20Book%2028.04.2023_for%20CCSDS%20Review.doc&action=default</a><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Many thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Bob<o:p></o:p></p>
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