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<div dir="ltr">Good catch on point 1; we can reference rfc9172. </div>
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<div id="divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" style="font-size:11pt" color="#000000"><b>From:</b> Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de <Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 27, 2022 4:13:39 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Dr. Keith L Scott <kscott@mitre.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> suzuki.kiyohisa@jaxa.jp <suzuki.kiyohisa@jaxa.jp>; beau.t.blanding@nasa.gov <beau.t.blanding@nasa.gov>; sis-dtn@mailman.ccsds.org <sis-dtn@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXT] RE: SIS-DTN G Resolution to submit the attached draft Red Book to the CESG for polling for agency review.</font>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="">Keith,</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="">I’ve just gone through the document and looks ok to me. Only two points:</span></p>
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<li class="x_MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm"><span style="">In the note immediately after 5.2.1, I read “The convergence layer service interface specified here is neither exhaustive nor exclusive. That is, supplementary DTN protocol specifications
(including, but not restricted to, the Bundle Protocol Security [BPSEC])”</span></li></ol>
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<li class="x_MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:18.0pt"><span style="">Should it be (BPSEC) instead of [BPSEC] or was the intention to point a BPSEC reference? In the latter case, we can put RFC 9172 between brackets as we also did in other parts of the document.</span></li></ul>
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<li class="x_MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm"><span style="">Being a revision of an existing book, very likely this should be a pink rather than a red book (affecting in any case only the first pages of this document). I’ll check in any case with Tom.</span></li></ol>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="">Thank you for clarifying point 1).</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="">Regards,</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="">Tomaso</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-US"> Dr. Keith L Scott <kscott@mitre.org>
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<b>Sent:</b> Dienstag, 26. Juli 2022 00:42<br>
<b>To:</b> Cola, Tomaso de <Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Kiyohisa Suzuki <suzuki.kiyohisa@jaxa.jp>; Blanding, Beau T. (MSFC-HP27)[HOSC SERVICES CONTRACT] <beau.t.blanding@nasa.gov>; sis-dtn@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> SIS-DTN G Resolution to submit the attached draft Red Book to the CESG for polling for agency review.</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Tomaso,</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">The SIS-DTN working group has developed and come to consensus on the attached draft Red Book as an update to the Bundle Protocol. The WG resolves to submit this to you as the SIS Area Director for your review as the
next step towards releasing the book for Agency Review. </span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Attached is the source text for the document and a PowerPoint slide containing the figures from the book.</span></p>
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