REVIEW ITEM DISPOSITION (RID): RED BOOK RID INITIATION FORM AGENCY RID NUMBER: SUBMITTING ORGANIZATION (Agency, Center): JAXA/NEC ------------------------------------------------------------------ REVIEWER'S NAME:Tomoyoshi Goda CODE:NEC (JAXA) E-MAIL ADDRESS:t-gouda@ah.jp.nec.com TELEPHONE:+81 42 333 1675 ------------------------------------------------------------------ DOCUMENT NUMBER: CCSDS 734.1-R-3 Red Book, Issue 3 DOCUMENT NAME: Licklider Transmission Protocol for CCSDS DATE ISSUED: May 2014 PAGE NUMBER: Page4-4 PARAGRAPH NUMBER: 4.4.1 RID SHORT TITLE: ------------------------------------------------------------------ DESCRIPTION OF REQUESTED CHANGE: (Use From: "..." To "..." format) 1) It is easier to read if sections 4.4.4 & 4.4.5 come after 4.4.1. The generation point of parameter gSession IDh for 4.4.2 & 4.4.3 should appear before these paragraphs. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- CATEGORY OF REQUESTED CHANGE: Technical Fact ___ Recommended _X_ Editorial __ NOTES: TECHNICAL FACT: Major technical change of sufficient magnitude as to render the Recommendation inaccurate and unacceptable if not corrected. (Supporting analysis/rationale is essential.) RECOMMENDED: Change of a nature that would, if incorporated, produce a marked improvement in document quality and acceptance. EDITORIAL: Typographical or other factual error needing correction. (This type of change will be made without feedback to submitter.) ---------------------------------------------------------------------- SUPPORTING ANALYSIS: ------------------------------------------------------------------ DISPOSITION: