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<DIV><SPAN class=443254218-15092005><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2>Jim,</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=443254218-15092005><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=443254218-15092005><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff size=2>Sure
thing, I'll make the change. One question: I'm not sure what you
meant by reliable file transfer where a return link is not available. If
the loop isn't closed, how is the file delivery reliable? (Feel free to
just say read the NORM spec if that's what's in there)</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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size=2></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=443254218-15092005><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2>Thanks,</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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size=2></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV><SPAN class=443254218-15092005><FONT face=Arial color=#0000ff
size=2>Chris</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV class=OutlookMessageHeader lang=en-us dir=ltr align=left><FONT
face=Tahoma size=2>-----Original Message-----<BR><B>From:</B>
sis-csi-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org [mailto:sis-csi-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org]
<B>On Behalf Of </B>James L. Rash<BR><B>Sent:</B> Thursday, September 15, 2005
2:38 PM<BR><B>To:</B> sis-csi@mailman.ccsds.org<BR><B>Subject:</B> Re:
[Sis-csi] Section 8 Revisions<BR><BR></FONT></DIV>
<DIV>At 12:08 AM -0400 9/15/05, Krupiarz, Christopher wrote:</DIV>
<BLOCKQUOTE cite="" type="cite">Enclosed are revisions to section 8 for
review. My attempt was to take<BR>Keith's bulleted comments and put
them into paragraph form. <BR><BR>Chris<BR><BR><BR>Content-Type:
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<DIV>Chris,</DIV>
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<DIV>I suggest that the title of section 8.1.1.2 should be changed from</DIV>
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<DIV> <FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#000000
size=+1><B> 8.1.1.2</B></FONT><FONT face=Arial color=#000000
size=+1><B><X-TAB> </X-TAB></B></FONT><FONT
face="Times New Roman" color=#000000 size=+1><B>CFDP Transmission from
Instrument to User</B></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV>to</DIV>
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<DIV> <FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#000000
size=+1><B> 8.1.1.2</B></FONT><FONT face=Arial color=#000000
size=+1><B><X-TAB> </X-TAB></B></FONT><FONT
face="Times New Roman" color=#000000 size=+1><B>Reliable File Transfer from
Instrument to User</B></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV>This works better because it more clearly indicates in more general terms
what the section is about. CFDP is not the only alternative for
reliable file transfer when, for example, a return link is unavailable, and
starting in the third sentence, the use of CFDP is amply specified for the
given example anyway. </DIV>
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<DIV>I would also suggest adding the following sentence in this section:</DIV>
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<BLOCKQUOTE>NORM (<FONT color=#000000>NACK-Oriented</FONT> Reliable
Multicast) (RFC 3940) can also be considered as an alternative choice for a
reliable file and stream delivery protocol over IP.</BLOCKQUOTE>
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<DIV>This sentence is appropriate for a Green Book, as it serves to promote
the reader's understanding through additional relevant
information.</DIV><X-SIGSEP><PRE>--
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<DIV><BR>James L. Rash<BR>Building 23, Room E403<BR>Code 588 -- Advanced
Architectures and Automation Branch<BR>NASA Goddard Space Flight
Center<BR>Greenbelt, MD 20771<BR>301-286-5246
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