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Keith--<br><br>
Some suggestions for consideration:<br><br>
1. Regarding 1.3 References, is it the intent that the Green Book be self
contained or will there also be Applicable Documents as integral parts,
plus Referenced Documents for general information? If there will be
integral documents as part of this Green Book, then suggest consideration
be given to adding an Applicable Documents list.<br><br>
2. Regarding 3. Scenarios. I agree with Howie on adding "Unmanned
Mars Exploration".<br><br>
3. Regarding 4. Communications Requirements. Shouldn't they be broke out
to agree with subsection entries under Section 3?<br><br>
4. Regarding 6. Comparison With Current Approaches, should this have an
"Issues" subsection here or in Section 7 Operations
Concept?<br><br>
Some thoughts.<br><br>
Bill<br><br>
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At 09:37 AM 3/21/2005, Scott,Keith L. wrote:<br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite=""><font face="arial" size=2>I put
a revised copy of the architecture green book at:
<a href="http://public.ccsds.org/sites/cwe/sis-csi/Public/CSI_GREEN_BOOK_Draft_0.2.doc">
http://public.ccsds.org/sites/cwe/sis-csi/Public/CSI_GREEN_BOOK_Draft_0.2.doc</a>
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<font face="arial" size=2>Please have a look; I'd like to get more
consensus on the table of contents and start hanging text on it.<br>
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<font face="arial" size=2>--keith<br>
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