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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>HI David,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Good job. Looks good to me.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Thanks!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Tim<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Edell, David J.
[mailto:David.Edell@jhuapl.edu] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, October 05, 2009 1:53 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Ray, Timothy J. (GSFC-5830); sis-ams@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: AMS Green Book<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Tim,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>I cleaned up those remaining
figures and uploaded the new version to the CWE. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Let me know if there’s anything
else to be added or updated.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>Thanks,</span><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";
color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>- David</span><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Ray, Timothy J.
(GSFC-5830) [mailto:timothy.j.ray@nasa.gov] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, October 01, 2009 4:30 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Edell, David J.; sis-ams@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: AMS Green Book<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Hi David,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Good job. This looks much
better. A few of the figures within chapter 6 do not appear
to have been cleaned up (6.1A, 6.1B, 6.10). If we decide to keep
the in-line drawings, I’d suggest that we at least clean up figure 6.10 (the
in-line version is missing some important explanatory text).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Thanks!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Tim<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Edell, David J.
[mailto:David.Edell@jhuapl.edu] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, September 29, 2009 6:25 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Ray, Timothy J. (GSFC-5830); sis-ams@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: AMS Green Book<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>I uploaded a new version of the
Green Book to the CWE at</span> <a
href="http://cwe.ccsds.org/sis/docs/SIS-AMS/Draft%20Documents/Green%20Book/Green%20Book%20Draft%202009_09_17A.doc">http://cwe.ccsds.org/sis/docs/SIS-AMS/Draft%20Documents/Green%20Book/Green%20Book%20Draft%202009_09_17A.doc</a>
(FYI: To view past versions of a document, you can click “history” from
the dropdown box). <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>I cleaned up the in-line images for Chapter 6 (RAMS). Apparently
using “paste special” and selecting JPG or PNG provides a cleaner method of
pasting powerpoint or visio documents, particularly within Office 2007.
In this version, the images are still scaled, but the arrows and text are not
modified from the original. As a supplement, I’ve also added an Appendix
at the end containing full-size versions of figures from chapters 5+6 – both
chapters use figures that can benefit from a full-page view. If we
decide to use this Appendix, I will clean it up further to ensure the numbering
and image sizes are more consistent between each of the figures. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>I’ll leave it to the group to decide whether to delete the
in-line images, omit the Appendix, or include both with a note at the beginning
of each chapter referencing the availability of alternative full-sized images
in the Appendix for the reader’s convenience. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";
color:#1F497D'>- David<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>
sis-ams-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org [mailto:sis-ams-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org] <b>On
Behalf Of </b>Ray, Timothy J. (GSFC-5830)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, September 18, 2009 2:23 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> sis-ams@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Sis-ams] AMS Green Book<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Dear Working Group,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>I attempted to clean up the figures in chapter 6 of the AMS
Green Book (chapter 6 covers Remote AMS), but ran into problems. The
original figures were moved in-line with the text (which is good) but were
reduced in size, and locations of some of the arrows in the figures were
changed. In my opinion, the figures are no longer intuitive (which was
the main purpose of using figures). Anyway, after unsuccessfully trying
to clean up the figures, I gave up and talked with Scott Burleigh. We
decided to push for restoring the full-sized figures and putting them in a
section dedicated to figures (perhaps an appendix or the beginning of chapter 6
or the end of chapter 6).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>(The unsuccessful attempts to clean up the figures are on my
local hard drive; the version of the AMS Green Book that is on the CWE retains
the non-intuitive figures; the change that Scott and I are suggesting has not yet
been made)<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Tim<o:p></o:p></p>
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