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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear SEA-SAWG,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We have been using the ISO 42010 spec as a sort of systems architecture meta-framework for many years. That spec has evolved over time and there is now a new DRAFT update in review. I looked at an earlier version and identified some issues
that I found troubling. I have not yet looked at this version to see if these have been remedied.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">If you have an interest in this topic please review the attached document and use the comments spreadsheet to provide feedback. I will integrate all inputs and provide the reply to this ISO subcommittee on behalf of the CCSDS SEA WG.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i>Please provide feedback to me no later than 19 Feb 2021 to allow me to integrate and “clean” the inputs.<o:p></o:p></i></b></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks, Peter<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Richard Hilliard <richh@mit.edu><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, January 12, 2021 at 11:38 AM<br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] Review of Draft International Standard ISO/IEC/IEEE 42010<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">If you are receiving this, you've expressed interest at some point in ISO/IEC/IEEE 42010.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">This is a chance to participate in review of the current draft.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Attached you will find: the draft standard; the summary of comments and their dispositions from the previous (April 2020) review; and a blank comment spreadsheet.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Alas, ISO has made this review a bit more challenging by publishing the Draft International Standard without line numbers. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks again, and don't hesitate to email me with any questions.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> — Rich Hilliard<o:p></o:p></p>
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<a href="mailto:richh@mit.edu">richh@mit.edu</a><br>
r.hilliard@computer.org<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Trebuchet MS",sans-serif;color:black">ISO/IEC/IEEE 42010, co-editor<br>
IEEE CS PEAB: Enterprise IT, chair<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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