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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body bgcolor=white lang=EN-GB link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Hi Peter,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>I have now returned from the southern continent – apologies for being out of the loop for a while. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>In preparation for tomorrow’s telecon, I have reviewed your outline and attempted to annotate it where I believe I can contribute, as requested. Please see attached. I have also raised some comments, for clarification/discussion on the expected content of some sections. Given the short descriptions, there does seem to be some repetition on some topics. I realise Section 2 is Introductory and later sections provide the detail, but Section 3 seems to cover an intermediate level of detail, which runs the risk of duplicating either Section 2 or the later sections. I think we need to be clearer about its Scope – or possibly consider removing/merging it into the other sections.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>It would also be useful for me to go over the new contributions I provided at the beginning of January, and get any feedback. I realise you may have discussed this in the previous telecon.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Cheers,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Roger<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><a name="_MailEndCompose"><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></a></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> SEA-SA [mailto:sea-sa-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Shames, Peter M (312B)<br><b>Sent:</b> 19 January 2017 18:30<br><b>To:</b> SEA-SA<br><b>Subject:</b> [Sea-sa] Outline of Green Book<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'>Dear SEA SA Colleagues,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'>Attached please find the updated draft of the Green Book outline.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'>As we discussed, please review it and try to identify two things:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'>1)</span><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"'> </span><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'>The parts of this document to which you can actively contribute<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'>2)</span><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:7.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"'> </span><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'>The parts of this book where the materials you have already prepared, or are preparing, will fit in<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'>Thanks, Peter<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div></body></html>