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<div dir="ltr">Dear Tomaso,</div>
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<div dir="ltr">Many <span>thanks for the prompt response and for your confirmation.<span></span></span></div>
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<div dir="ltr"><span>@Tom with this confirmation could you please proceed with the<span> Agency Review, since all conditions are met.</span></span></div>
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<div dir="ltr"><span><span>Regards </span></span></div>
<div dir="ltr"><span><span>Mehran</span></span></div>
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<div id="divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" style="font-size:11pt" color="#000000"><b>From:</b> Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de <Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 29, 2024 12:58:04 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Mehran Sarkarati <Mehran.Sarkarati@esa.int><br>
<b>Cc:</b> costin.radulescu@jpl.nasa.gov <costin.radulescu@jpl.nasa.gov>; Daniel Fischer <Daniel.Fischer@esa.int>; moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org <moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org>; thomas.gannett@tgannett.net <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: CESG-P-2024-06-001 Approval to release CCSDS 522.2-R-2, Mission Operations—Mission Data Product Distribution Services (Red Book, Issue 2) for CCSDS Agency review</font>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear Mehran,</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you for the clarification and confirming the way to address my points. I’m ok with the proposed approach, so that my conditions can be now considered closed.</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Regards,</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Tomaso</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Mehran Sarkarati <Mehran.Sarkarati@esa.int>
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<b>Sent:</b> Montag, 28. Oktober 2024 18:07<br>
<b>To:</b> de Cola, Tomaso <Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de><br>
<b>Cc:</b> costin.radulescu@jpl.nasa.gov; Daniel Fischer <Daniel.Fischer@esa.int>; moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org; CCSDS Secretariat <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net><br>
<b>Subject:</b> FW: CESG-P-2024-06-001 Approval to release CCSDS 522.2-R-2, Mission Operations—Mission Data Product Distribution Services (Red Book, Issue 2) for CCSDS Agency review</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Aptos">Going back through my emails, I could not find any trace of exchanges with you with regard to the condition you had raised on the Mission Data Product Distribution Service.</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Aptos">Let me please start with apologizing for this oversight on our side and in case I have missed any emails.</span></p>
<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Aptos">We have resolved the condition of Peter and have his agreement to move forward with the agency review.</span></p>
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Aptos">The point you had raised is very valid and needs better clarification, which we are happy to implement as below.</span></p>
<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt; font-family:Aptos">Please let us know if the following implementation would address sufficiently the condition you had raised:</span></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">contained in section 4 are normativ</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">e: T</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">he tables and any associated requirements</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">.
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<p class="x_MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt; color:black">Best Regards</span></p>
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