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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear Mehran,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you for the clarification and confirming the way to address my points. I’m ok with the proposed approach, so that my conditions can be now considered closed.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Tomaso<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Mehran Sarkarati <Mehran.Sarkarati@esa.int>
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<b>Sent:</b> Montag, 28. Oktober 2024 18:07<br>
<b>To:</b> de Cola, Tomaso <Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de><br>
<b>Cc:</b> costin.radulescu@jpl.nasa.gov; Daniel Fischer <Daniel.Fischer@esa.int>; moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org; CCSDS Secretariat <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net><br>
<b>Subject:</b> FW: CESG-P-2024-06-001 Approval to release CCSDS 522.2-R-2, Mission Operations—Mission Data Product Distribution Services (Red Book, Issue 2) for CCSDS Agency review<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Aptos">Dear Tomaso,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Aptos">Going back through my emails, I could not find any trace of exchanges with you with regard to the condition you had raised on the Mission Data Product Distribution Service.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Aptos">Let me please start with apologizing for this oversight on our side and in case I have missed any emails.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Aptos">We have resolved the condition of Peter and have his agreement to move forward with the agency review.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Aptos">The point you had raised is very valid and needs better clarification, which we are happy to implement as below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Aptos">Please let us know if the following implementation would address sufficiently the condition you had raised:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Aptos;color:windowtext">Add text to clarify
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">that only <b>the data type definitions</b></span><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">,
</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">contained in section 4 are normativ</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">e: T</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">he tables and any associated requirements</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">.
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The UML diagrams are only informative.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="color:black;margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<span style="font-size:11.0pt">Remove comment relating to services - in an earlier version of the document the Information Model preceded the Service Specification but this was not edited.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Best Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Mehran (on behalf of the SM&C WG)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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