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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Dear Peter,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Sorry if my statement was unclear.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Tomaso’s concern was related to the “Data Model” hence our answer is formulated towards that concern.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">The “</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">service specification and service operations” are
of course normative but not subject of Tomaso’s comment. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Hope this clarifies.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Mehran</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">From:
</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">Shames, Peter M (US 9740) <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, 28. October 2024 at 18:56<br>
<b>To: </b>Mehran Sarkarati <Mehran.Sarkarati@esa.int>, tomaso.decola@dlr.de <Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de><br>
<b>Cc: </b>CCSDS Secretariat <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>, moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org <moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org>, Daniel Fischer <Daniel.Fischer@esa.int><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [EXTERNAL] [Moims-sc] FW: CESG-P-2024-06-001 Approval to release CCSDS 522.2-R-2, Mission Operations—Mission Data Product Distribution Services (Red Book, Issue 2) for CCSDS Agency review<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Dear Mehran,</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">I just saw this note and had to go back through the email and document trail again to make sure that I understand just what is being proposed.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">I understood that you were standardizing:</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">The service specification and service operations (sec 3)</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">The service data type definitions (sec 4)</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">I am well aware that in the usual SMC style these are all specified as abstractions, and that they do not become fully realized until there is an interface binding
and data binding applied. So we can leave that issue out of discussion.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">What caught my eye in your last email to Tomaso was this statement:</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:36.0pt"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">“only
<b>the data type definitions, </b>contained in section 4 are normative”</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">This statement, if accurate, would appear to nullify the “</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">service specification and service operations”
that are defined in Section 3. Is that really your intent? </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Regards, Peter</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">From:
</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">MOIMS-SC <moims-sc-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> on behalf of Mehran Sarkarati via MOIMS-SC <moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, October 28, 2024 at 10:07</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">AM<br>
<b>To: </b>tomaso.decola@dlr.de <Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de><br>
<b>Cc: </b>CCSDS Secretariat <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>, moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org <moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org>, Daniel Fischer <Daniel.Fischer@esa.int><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] [Moims-sc] FW: CESG-P-2024-06-001 Approval to release CCSDS 522.2-R-2, Mission Operations—Mission Data Product Distribution Services (Red Book, Issue 2) for CCSDS Agency review</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Dear Tomaso,</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Going back through my emails, I could not find any trace of exchanges with you with regard to the condition you had raised on the Mission Data Product Distribution
Service.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Let me please start with apologizing for this oversight on our side and in case I have missed any emails.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">We have resolved the condition of Peter and have his agreement to move forward with the agency review.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">The point you had raised is very valid and needs better clarification, which we are happy to implement as below.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Please let us know if the following implementation would address sufficiently the condition you had raised:</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:windowtext">Add text to clarify
</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">that only <b>the data type definitions,
</b>contained in section 4 are normative: The tables and any associated requirements. The UML diagrams are only informative.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="color:black;margin-left:0cm;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Remove comment relating to services - in an earlier version of the document the Information Model preceded the Service Specification but this was not edited.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Best Regards</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Mehran (on behalf of the SM&C WG)</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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