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<p class="MsoPlainText">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US">First of all, sorry for having missed yesterday's meeting. It seems I had an email issue : the meeting was not in my agenda until today....<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US">I have some minor comments on the book itself (see below), and comments on other people comments (like renaming of some Composites or authorization of NULLs in some interfaces). How do we deal with the discussion
on other people comments?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US">My comments on the book are the following:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">1.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US">The area should be MPD and not MDPS (because we never put the "Service" part in the name: otherwise MAL would be MALS, MC would be MCS, MPS would be MPSS etc...)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">2.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US">The tables of composites/messages are not the same as what was defined in MAL : we should really be consistent between books.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">3.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US">In M&C we decided to often use key + domain instead of an objectRef as it is more understandable by humains (and lighter on bandwith). Wouldn’t it be relevant in MPDS as well ?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">4.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US">In the operations GetProduct / GetProductFile<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">a.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US">it's actually a getProduct(File)<b><i><u>s</u></i></b> (plural)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">b.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US">I wonder if the ack could return the number of elements to retrieve if known, 0 if not<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">5.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-US">The service "Product Delivery" and its operations are named from the point of view of the provider, whereas all other services are named from the point of view of the subscriber. To be consistant I would rename
notifyProductDelivery => monitorProductDelivery and deliverProducts => receiveProduct (or a better verb?)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US">Thank you <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US">Olivier<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><span style="mso-fareast-language:FR">-----Message d'origine-----<br>
De : MOIMS-SC <moims-sc-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> De la part de Serge Lacourte via MOIMS-SC<br>
Envoyé : mardi 27 février 2024 18:07<br>
À : moims-sc@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
Objet : Re: [Moims-sc] Draft MPDS Blue Book and XML Specification for WG review</span></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Hi All,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">here are my comments on the MPDS book.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">-- <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Serge Lacourte<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">Directeur general<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">ScalAgent Distributed Technologies SA<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">tel. +33 4 76 29 79 81<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoPlainText">mobile. +33 6 86 47 41 06<o:p></o:p></p>
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