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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Courier">See attached the CDM P-1.0.4 for internal review by the Working Group (changes tracked, changes accepted, blank CRM, prior CRM with results, and review assignments). As Brian notes, we've
intended that this version the CDM be the final internal draft, i.e., soon after we conclude the internal review, we should be able to submit the document to the Secretariat for CESG Polling, CMC Polling, and Agency Review.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Courier">With that in mind, and assuming that most if not all major changes are incorporated into this version, review with both a technical eye and a proofreading eye... we will experiment with
the notion of combining a final technical review with a proofreading review.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Courier">Document Review assignments are attached... the average number of pages per reviewer is 18.67 pages (some folks got a few more, some a few less).
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Courier">Please try to conclude your review and send the results to Brian (email address below) prior to the time of our March telecon 03/22/2023.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Courier">Thanks!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Courier">David<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">"Swinburne, Brian [UK]" <<span style="background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">brian.swinburne@uk.airbus.com</span>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, February 20, 2023 at 2:36 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>David Berry <david.s.berry@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Cc: </b>Daniel Oltrogge <dan@comspoc.com><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] CCSDS CDM P1.0.4 (Updated)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Hi David,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Please find attached the completed CDM P1.0.4 including the RTN Coordinate Frame edit ready for review by the group. I have included the changes accepted and changes
tracked version, the changes tracked are against P1.0.2 since P1.0.3 did not get a complete review. Also attached is a blank CRM and also the completed P1.0.3/P1.0.2 CRM for your records.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">I would envisage this as being the last version for internal review (hopefully!) and as such I do not really want to accept any major changes unless someone really
spots a major issue with the document as it stands.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">I’ll leave to you to distribute to the group as you can add the review assignments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Best regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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