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<div>NHM WB12 comments from Dale Force.</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>"Force, Dale A. (GRC-LCF0)" <<a href="mailto:dale.a.force@nasa.gov">dale.a.force@nasa.gov</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Monday, June 29, 2015 at 1:49 PM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>David Berry <<a href="mailto:David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov">David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>RE: NHM Version 12<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Dave,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">I am attaching my comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);">Dale Force<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:moims-nav-exec-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-nav-exec-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a> [<a href="mailto:moims-nav-exec-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">mailto:moims-nav-exec-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Berry, David S (3920)<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, May 24, 2015 9:49 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [MOIMS-NAV-EXEC] FW: NHM Version 12<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:Courier;color:black">Attached is the NHM White Book version 12 that Joe has prepared. See his notes below for special instructions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:Courier;color:black">I've also attached document review assignments, in keeping with our recent practice of "divide and conquer" recommended by Juergen, and a blank CRM for your comments. Please
complete your review and commentary by 01-Jul-2015.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:Courier;color:black">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Joseph Hashmall <<a href="mailto:joseph.hashmall@ai-solutions.com">joseph.hashmall@ai-solutions.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Saturday, May 23, 2015 at 11:32 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>David Berry <<a href="mailto:David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov">David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"<a href="mailto:moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>NHM Version 12<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">David,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">I've finished the NHM version 12 and attached copies.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">There are several places in it that need extra scrutiny and probably some additions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">1) I've completely rewritten sections 3 and 5 and they should be examined with care.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">2) I've made a stab at putting in Annex A. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"> The numbering in the requirement list table is different from what was in the CDM (the model I used) and I don't know it it conforms with the CCSDS requirement for
this table.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;"> The column giving references in this table may need to be emmended. I have not included any references to the XML section and these may need to be added.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">3) In Table D-1 I've updated some of the SANA registry items. The registry should be updated to match the table but I'm not certain how to do this. Am I authorized to
do it directly or do I have to go through some process of getting approval?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">4) Although I've updated the Trace column in Table I-1 I have not included any traces to XML portions of the document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">I'll try to send this to the entire working group as well as separately to you but if you don't get two copies then it probably didn't go through to the entire group.
In that case could you please forward it?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: black;">Joe<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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