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<div>Dan:</div>
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<div>I've attached my review comments of the ODM P2.30, primarily for sections 2 and 6, with a few for Annex A. A number of the suggested changes could affect section 7, so I excluded that from consideration at this time.</div>
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<div>Regards,</div>
<div>David</div>
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<div>P.S.: To all in the WG... please try to complete your ODM review assignment as soon as possible (Section 2, 6, and Annex A... we can deal with other sections in future drafts). I'm not sure how much feedback Dan has received to date but our target date
was 15-Jun-2015 (YES, I'm late too...).</div>
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<div>Thanks!</div>
<div>DSB</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>"Oltrogge, Daniel" <<a href="mailto:doltrogge@agi.com">doltrogge@agi.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Thursday, April 9, 2015 at 8:43 AM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>David Berry <<a href="mailto:David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov">David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>ODM v.2.30 Draft for your review...<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Per my ODM revision action item, here is draft ODM v.2.30 which incorporates all of the 15 suggested revisions that you kindly provided me at the Pasadena CCSDS meeting.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
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Dan<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Daniel L. Oltrogge<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">SDC Program Manager & Senior Research Astrodynamicist<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Center for Space Standards and Innovation<o:p></o:p></p>
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oltrogge@agi.com</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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