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<div>Joe:</div>
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<div>Attached are my comments on the NHM as far as I have written them up. I still have more to write up, but thought you could get started with this material. It covers from the beginning through page 5-14. </div>
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<div>Regards,</div>
<div>David</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span><Berry>, David Berry <<a href="mailto:David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov">David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Thursday, October 30, 2014 at 8:18 AM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-nav-exec@mailman.ccsds.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>FW: NHM V10<br>
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<div>Attached are Joe Hashmall's latest updates of the NHM White Book, along with the annotated comments matrix (CRM). Joe's explanation regarding the color codes is below.</div>
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<div>We will discussing the NHM extensively at London (Wednesday 11/12/2014 according the agenda).</div>
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<div>Regards,</div>
<div>David</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Joseph Hashmall <<a href="mailto:joseph.hashmall@ai-solutions.com">joseph.hashmall@ai-solutions.com</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Sunday, October 26, 2014 at 5:16 PM<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>David Berry <<a href="mailto:David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov">David.S.Berry@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Cc: </span>"Richon, Karen V. (GSFC-5950)" <<a href="mailto:karen.v.richon@nasa.gov">karen.v.richon@nasa.gov</a>>, "Raymond, Juan C. (GSFC-5910)" <<a href="mailto:juan.c.raymond@nasa.gov">juan.c.raymond@nasa.gov</a>>, "Patrick
Zimmerman (<a href="mailto:patrick.zimmerman@nasa.gov">patrick.zimmerman@nasa.gov</a>)" <<a href="mailto:patrick.zimmerman@nasa.gov">patrick.zimmerman@nasa.gov</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>NHM V10<br>
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<p>​David,<br>
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<p>I completed dealing with the suggested revision of the NHM 9 and attach the NHM 10. First, I combined the various CRMs into a single table and went through it removing duplicate entries and responding to all of the suggestions. A version of the combined
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<p>It is color coded according to my response: green if I believe I have satisfied the request, yellow if the request needs more discussion, and red if I reject the request. Included in the last category are a number of requests that I think are due to MS
Word foibles. For example, hyperlinks and references within the document appeared to disappear​ in some copies.<br>
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<p>I have also written extensive comments explaining the various things I have done and reasons behind my choices. At the London meeting (BTW: last week I finally got official confirmation of my travel authorization) I plan to go through the combined CRM (and
if possible with the document projected on an adjacent screen) and discuss each of the issues that need discussion.<br>
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<p>The major comments were from you, Patrick, and Juan. I hope that the entire working group, but at least the three of you, will look at my responses and the changes I've made so we can discuss them in London.<br>
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<p>Joe<br>
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