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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-GB link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Dear All,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Apologies for being a day late, but it has taken some time to complete the service specification sections of the document for the remaining four services.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I have uploaded Draft C3 to the Google Drive at: <a href="https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PqEdzmgVcfWSeq_JR4rvfJsaUl1r7h3p/view?usp=sharing">https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PqEdzmgVcfWSeq_JR4rvfJsaUl1r7h3p/view?usp=sharing</a> for your review before the next telecon.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>This includes 15 comments from myself which I would like to go through at our meeting next week, preferably before general review comments.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>There is still work to be done on the document, primarily in sections 1,2 and appendices. This should not affect service specifications.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>For Veniamin’s benefit, the following is a summary of what has changed since the last draft:<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>1.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>I have updated the MPS Services Overview section §2.4 to make it a higher level summary as agreed.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>2.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>I have updated the Planning Request Service section §4.2 in line with agreements at the last telecon – removing unnecessary requirements.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>3.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>I have completed the sections in §4 for the remaining 4 services.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>4.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>I modified the getPlanStatus operation in §4.3.7 changing the output data structure to PlanUpdate for consistency with other services and operations.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>5.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>I added a field to the getSystemConfig operation in §4.5.13 to allow specification of the Version.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>6.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>I have changed some operation field names to make it clearer where a message field is a Reference rather than the full Object, and to harmonise across multiple messages /services.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>7.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]>I have added some more Error codes in §5 corresponding to failure of specific operations to update/delete/revoke.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Roger<o:p></o:p></p></div></body></html>