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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-GB link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72" style='word-wrap:break-word'><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>I’ve added (almost) all of Roberta’s comments to <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/oze4kbj9z7rn9fk/OAIS-IF%20Rationale%20Scenarios%20and%20Requirements-20210227.docx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/oze4kbj9z7rn9fk/OAIS-IF%20Rationale%20Scenarios%20and%20Requirements-20210227.docx?dl=0</a><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Roberta Svanetti<br><b>Sent:</b> 23 February 2021 14:33<br><b>To:</b> MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability <moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org><br><b>Cc:</b> 'david@giaretta.org' <david@giaretta.org><br><b>Subject:</b> [Moims-dai] OAIS-IF Rationale Scenarios and Requirements-20210219 my comments<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Hi David, Hi All,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>I read the updated version of the document: <a href="https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.dropbox.com%2Fs%2Fvvjmkh7lkb93gwx%2FOAIS-IF%2520Rationale%2520Scenarios%2520and%2520Requirements-20210219.docx%3Fdl%3D0&data=04%7C01%7CRoberta.Svanetti%40dedagroup.it%7C491f3fc34f9d4b34f2c008d8d7dc71a1%7Cbbf156d433fa4fee86f62cfcb1359ef0%7C0%7C0%7C637496690127127087%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C2000&sdata=WN41Sd3aN0IUtrxDJ5DCXjqAOt3h1LPlwDBCFAjCztE%3D&reserved=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/vvjmkh7lkb93gwx/OAIS-IF%20Rationale%20Scenarios%20and%20Requirements-20210219.docx?dl=0</a> to give a clearer idea of how I I send you in the attached PDF copy, my annotations with few editorial suggested changes.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Changes in section 2.3 are clear. Up to section 7 the document is very clear and complete. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Kind Regards<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=IT style='mso-fareast-language:IT'>Roberta Svanetti<o:p></o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='mso-fareast-language:IT'>Operations Manager<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=IT style='mso-fareast-language:IT'>Deda.Cloud<span style='color:black'><o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='color:black;mso-fareast-language:IT'>T +39 02 57775690 | M +39 335 7294121<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='color:black;mso-fareast-language:IT'>Deda Cloud Srl </span><span lang=IT style='mso-fareast-language:IT'>– S<span style='color:black'>ede di Cassina de Pecchi (Milano), c/o Cassina Plaza, via Roma 108 <o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='mso-fareast-language:IT'> <u><span style='color:#0563C1'><a href="http://www.deda.cloud/">www.deda.cloud</a></span></u><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='mso-fareast-language:IT'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='mso-fareast-language:IT'><img border=0 width=121 height=43 style='width:1.2569in;height:.4444in' id="Immagine_x0020_1" src="cid:image001.jpg@01D70E9A.48B08780"></span><span lang=IT style='mso-fareast-language:IT'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=IT style='font-size:10.0pt;mso-fareast-language:IT'><o:p> </o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=IT style='font-size:10.0pt;mso-fareast-language:IT'>#IoRestoACasa (per il mio bene e per quello degli altri) <o:p></o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='font-size:10.0pt;mso-fareast-language:IT'>Per scoprire le nostre storie di Resilienza seguiteci su <u><span style='color:#0563C1'><a href="https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.linkedin.com%2Fcompany%2Fdedagroup-spa%3Futm_source%3Dmail%26utm_medium%3Dsignature%26utm_content%3Dcv%26utm_campaign%3Dcv&data=02%7C01%7CRoberta.Svanetti%40dedagroup.it%7C2b681ad713b24f8bac2a08d7d584ff16%7Cbbf156d433fa4fee86f62cfcb1359ef0%7C0%7C0%7C637212639492438131&sdata=%2F9KzcsjHIf%2FuvI6dEFNaMsVvn7wwyYi3kxgPfpWGRUc%3D&reserved=0">LinkedIn</a></span></u> e su <u><span style='color:#0563C1'><a href="https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.dedagroup.it%2Fdistantimauniti%3Futm_source%3Dmail%26utm_medium%3Dsignature%26utm_content%3Dcv%26utm_campaign%3Dcv&data=02%7C01%7CRoberta.Svanetti%40dedagroup.it%7C2b681ad713b24f8bac2a08d7d584ff16%7Cbbf156d433fa4fee86f62cfcb1359ef0%7C0%7C0%7C637212639492438131&sdata=0bBSRuXnqVMw4h8n6KdozkevP6viVBo%2BZ0htT2jq5aE%3D&reserved=0">dedagroup.it/distantimauniti</a></span></u><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='font-size:10.0pt;mso-fareast-language:IT'>Per informazioni su come stiamo fronteggiando l’emergenza: <u><span style='color:#0563C1'><a href="https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.dedagroup.it%2Finfocovid%3Futm_source%3Dmail%26utm_medium%3Dsignature%26utm_content%3Dcv%26utm_campaign%3Dcv&data=02%7C01%7CRoberta.Svanetti%40dedagroup.it%7C2b681ad713b24f8bac2a08d7d584ff16%7Cbbf156d433fa4fee86f62cfcb1359ef0%7C0%7C0%7C637212639492438131&sdata=dPZbenQca6cYTx5ROMKEcvkyPzIyRedSD71trWstRu4%3D&reserved=0">dedagroup.it/infocovid</a></span></u><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='font-size:10.0pt;mso-fareast-language:IT'>Nel gruppo Deda convivono energie e competenze IT molto diversificate: se avete necessità di confronto sulle scelte in emergenza che state intraprendendo potete scrivere a <u><span style='color:#0563C1'><a href="mailto:helpme@dedagroup.it">helpme@dedagroup.it</a></span></u></span><span lang=IT style='mso-fareast-language:IT'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=IT style='font-size:8.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>Le informazioni contenute in questo messaggio di posta elettronica sono riservate e confidenziali e ne e' vietata la diffusione in qualsiasi modo o forma. 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