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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-GB link="#0563C1" vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Anyone else noted any issues? Please let me know otherwise I will send this to the CCSDS Editor tomorrow.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>In terms of Terry’s suggested I propose to spell out PAIS as he suggests, but not change anything else because, although they are useful comments it would just keep the book open for discussion.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Terry Longstreth<br><b>Sent:</b> 03 September 2020 16:16<br><b>To:</b> moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Moims-dai] OAIS version ready for CCSDS Technical Editor - please check<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p><span style='color:red'>Under document control, Notes section: </span><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'><o:p></o:p></span></p><ul type=disc><li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'>PAIS should be spelled out<o:p></o:p></li><li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'>Action on Annex B should be stated, by for example, replacing first sentence with: <o:p></o:p></li></ul><p style='mso-margin-top-alt:9.35pt;margin-right:0cm;margin-bottom:5.0pt;margin-left:85.7pt'>"ANNEX B from the previous issue <b><i>has been substantially rewritten. Previously, it </i></b>described the relationship of OAIS to other standards; but its contents were <b><i>increasingly</i></b> out of date as those other standards<b><i> were developed </i></b>along different directions and timelines as compared to OAIS development."<o:p></o:p></p><p><span style='color:red'>1.4 Conformance, last paragraph, is confusing. It might help if we explained the difference between normative (1.6.2, 2.3, 4.3) and Mandatory (and do we expect to extend 16363 to accommodate all those) :</span> <o:p></o:p></p><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><div><p class=MsoNormal>To summarize, Sections 1.6.2, 2.3, 3.2 and 4.3 are normative and form the basis of conformance to this Recommended Practice. All other sections are informative, but could aid the user in designing archives that conform to this Recommended Practice.<o:p></o:p></p></div></blockquote></blockquote><div><p class=MsoNormal>/s/Terry Longstreth<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>On 2020-09-03 6:00 AM, <a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p></div><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>The updated and approved version of OAIS is at <a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x0020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0%20">https://cwe.ccsds.org/moims/docs/MOIMS-DAI/Draft%20Documents/OAIS%20v3/650x0020_CESG_Approval_Mod-20200901-SEA-approved.doc?Web=0 </a></span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>I’d appreciate it if people could take a look to make sure things are as expected.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Then I’ll send it on to the CCSDS Technical Editor.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Regards</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>.>David</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'><br><br><o:p></o:p></span></p><pre>_______________________________________________<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>MOIMS-DAI mailing list<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><a href="mailto:MOIMS-DAI@mailman.ccsds.org">MOIMS-DAI@mailman.ccsds.org</a><o:p></o:p></pre><pre><a href="https://mailman.ccsds.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/moims-dai">https://mailman.ccsds.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/moims-dai</a><o:p></o:p></pre></blockquote><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>-- <br><img border=0 width=339 height=142 style='width:3.5347in;height:1.4791in' id="Picture_x0020_1" src="cid:image001.jpg@01D6850F.FA310AD0"><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></body></html>