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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-GB link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>Meeting: 10:00 Tuesday (EST), 1500 UK time, 1600 Paris time<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>Join it by clicking the link:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><a href="https://join.skype.com/ykyu5SIPhSnD">https://join.skype.com/ykyu5SIPhSnD</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>*Don't have Skype yet? Download it before you join <a href="https://www.skype.com">https://www.skype.com</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>General schedule:<o:p></o:p></span></p><table class=MsoNormalTable border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0 style='border-collapse:collapse'><tr><td valign=top style='border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>Tuesday of the month<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-left:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Activity<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-left:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>Technical Editor(s)<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr><td valign=top style='border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>1<sup>st</sup> <o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>ISO 16363 Audit and Certification Metrics<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US>John Garrett, David Giaretta<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr><td valign=top style='border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>2<sup>nd</sup><o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>IPELTU Info Preservation Enabling Long-Term Usage<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>David Giaretta, Roberta Svanetti<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr><td valign=top style='border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>3<sup>rd</sup><o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>OAIS-IF DAADD OAIS Interoperability Framework – Digital Archive Architecture Design Doc<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>Steve Hughes<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr><td valign=top style='border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>4<sup>th</sup><o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>OAIS update finalization, Group administration, Planning, new projects, or special issues identified other weeks<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr><td valign=top style='border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>5<sup>th</sup> <o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>OAIS update finalization, Group administration, Planning, new projects, or special issues identified other weeks<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td valign=top style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt'><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p></td></tr></table><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Draft agenda this week (4th Tuesday of the month):<o:p></o:p></span></p><ol style='margin-top:0cm' start=1 type=1><li class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3'><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>We are using <a href="http://review.oais.info">http://review.oais.info</a> to track actions – see <a href="http://review.oais.info/buglist.cgi?bug_status=__open__&list_id=2522&order=Importance&product=ACTIONS&query_format=specific">http://review.oais.info/buglist.cgi?bug_status=__open__&list_id=2522&order=Importance&product=ACTIONS&query_format=specific</a><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3'><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>A reminder that we have received 26 RIDs – what we have called “suggested changes” - from CCSDS-SEA: see <a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=281">http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=281</a> to <a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=306">http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=306</a> . Please put in your responses to these so we can discuss them in detail.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><table class=MsoNormalTable border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0 width=876 style='width:657.0pt;border-collapse:collapse'><tr style='height:14.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:14.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Bug ID<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-left:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:14.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Summary<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-left:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:14.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Changed<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-left:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:14.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Explanation of the reason for the suggested change<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:43.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>281<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-001<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>17/01/2020 13:09<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>A widely accepted definition of "system" is that it is composed of hardware, software, people, and procedures. To say that "an archive (system) consists of an organization" is a very peculiar use of common terminology.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:72.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>282<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-002<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>17/01/2020 14:29<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>This is a recommended practice and is largely about concepts and procedures. As such it is much more about systems than it is organizations. Also, I find the repetition of "organizations, which may themselves be part of larger organizations" to provide no added value, largely because a) it is repeated here and above, and b) because it is almost tautological.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:101.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:101.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>283<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:101.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-003<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:101.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>21/01/2020 10:40<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:101.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>I think it is useful to be clear that these are abstractions and there is no expectation that they can be directly implemented. This is stated, in different terms, in Sec 1.4.<br><br>Even with the specific use of abstract, but formal, language for these systems elements there can be no assumption that this is a specification for how to build a system. At best it might become a specification for how to think about designing and building a system. Or evaluating existing systems.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:72.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>284<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-004<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>18/01/2020 19:09<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>The ASL is being contemporaneously processed and it covers the OAIS as well as the rest of MOIMS and SOIS. Instead of using a separate, and non-standard, set of representations, which are in some cases hard to understand, I recommend that OAIS adopt the ASL/RASDS representations. It will make understanding all of this much easier. See attached screenshot of ASL Fig 3-1.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:29.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>285<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-005<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>21/01/2020 10:56<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>The definitions of semantics and syntax, as stated, are weakly specified and somewhat intertwined.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:58.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>286<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-006<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>18/01/2020 19:47<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>The term "metadata" is widely used and understood, but it only appears in a couple of places in this document(pg 4-15, 4-33). The two separate thoughts embodied in the current "Representation information" description should probably be sorted out and clarified. They are distinct.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:14.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:14.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>287<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:14.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-007<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:14.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>18/01/2020 19:51<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:14.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Re-think whether this paragraph really adds anything or if it misses the mark entirely.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:58.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>288<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-008<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>21/01/2020 11:16<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Is the ability to "re-perform an artistic piece", presumably with different musicians, actors, or dancers, really an instance of "digital preservation"? No argument with the value of preserving images, movies, and/or recordings of such artistic endeavors, but is "re-performance" really an aspect of preservation?<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:72.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>289<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-009<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>20/01/2020 08:22<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>This section introduces the term Submission Information Schema, and states that it has a formal definition and is "normally" used in the SA, but it neither defines this SIS (even abstractly) nor makes further reference to it. if this is a formal definition that is normally part of an SA it should be defined somewhere. The same situation seems to obtain for "dissemination information schema" in the following sec 2.5.4.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:72.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>290<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-010<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>19/01/2020 15:13<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:72.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Consider if something further needs to be stated about "designated community" terminology in the basic sense and if it (the definitions of the semantics) needs to be archived along with the data itself. This comes up again on pg 3-5 in sec 3.3.5. But perhaps you think of this is another form of Representation Information? If so, that should be clarified.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:29.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>291<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-011<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>19/01/2020 15:24<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>The inclusion of extra, unlabelled, lines in this diagram that have no stated purpose nor type is confusing.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:58.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>292<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-012<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>19/01/2020 21:26<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Treating OS functions in the same way as OAIS services weakens their status. Failing to provide even some abstract formalism for these important, exposed, OAIS service interfaces does likewise. Note that this is not asking to define the internal service interfaces in a formal way, just the external ones exposed to the "users".<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:101.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:101.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>293<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:101.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-013<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:101.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>19/01/2020 21:31<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:101.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>In this set of diagrams it is really easy to overlook the rather subtle distinctions between the clipped corners and rounded corners of different boxes. The use of different colors helps, but even there an opportunity for consistence was missed. For instance, the "Function" color codes (orange, yellow, green, ...)introduced here in these white box diagrams could also be applied to the Functional Entities themselves, on "black box" diagrams like Fig 4-1 (and others). It's a little thing, but that way the color codes would be consistent throughout and actually help to convey meaning.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:232.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:232.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>294<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:232.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-014<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:232.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>15/01/2020 19:50<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:232.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>In this section which addresses "Archive Interoperability" it would be ideal if a more formal set of definitions for registry, repository, query, and producer objects were used and if a set of clear, if abstract, interface definitions were provided. The RASIM provides a clear set of abstract definitions for such functional objects as well as recipes for combining them to build information management systems. These could be put into an annex and referenced here.<br><br>The same situation occurs in re "repository" (see SEA-650x0-015). It is also the case that none of the other documents in this series, OAIS (650.0), PAIS (651.0), nor TDR (652.0)provide any sort of concrete definitions for these fundamental building blocks for information management systems and their interfaces. <br><br>Note that use of such abstract service interfaces is not the same as providing anything like a concrete interface spec or technology binding. The treatment would still be abstract, and open to a separate transformation into interoperable designs, but it would be a whole lot clearer.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:145.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:145.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>295<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:145.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-015<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:145.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>19/01/2020 21:45<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:145.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>In this section which addresses "Distributed Functionality" it would be ideal if a more formal set of definitions for registry, repository, query, and producer objects were used and if a set of clear if abstract, interface definitions were provided. The RASIM provides a clear set of abstract definitions for such functional objects as well as recipes for combining them to build information management systems. <br><br>The same situation occurs in re "registry" (see SEA-650x0-014). It is also the case that none of the other documents in this series, OAIS (650.0), PAIS (651.0), nor TDR (652.0)provide any sort of concrete definitions for these fundamental, and essential, building blocks for information management systems and their interfaces.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:130.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:130.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>296<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:130.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-016<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:130.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>20/01/2020 11:23<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:130.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>In this section which addresses OAIS Functional Entities would be vastly improved if a more formal set of definitions for registry, repository, query, and product service objects were used and if a set of clear if abstract, interface definitions were provided. The RASIM provides a clear set of abstract definitions for such functional objects as well as recipes for combining them to build information management systems. <br><br>Even though this is a Magenta Book, and as such describes entities in the abstract, these can be described in much clearer and more explanatory ways by referencing the RASIM abstract building block definitions and service interfaces.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:43.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>297<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-017<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>15/01/2020 19:55<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>It feels as though a rather well known set of terms in knowledge management has been overlooked in favor of a locally defined term. It is not clear that this is the best possible approach.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:43.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>298<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-018<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>20/01/2020 12:03<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>This is just one of the types of registries that seem to be appropriate as "meta" functional objects in an Open Archive System. A registry of package formats, for SIP, AIP, DIP, AIU, and PDI is another. A registry of Finding, Ordering, and Retrieval Aids is another.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:43.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>299<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-019<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>19/01/2020 21:52<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>This is just one of the types of data preservation that seems to be overlooked in this document. Or maybe it is in here, as some aspect of "migration" and I just do not recognize it.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:58.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>300<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-020<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>15/01/2020 20:00<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>An approach that covers the functional model, and information models, in Sec 6, and which is rather more comprehensive, even if it is still abstract and not directly implementable, would be a real improvement over what has been attempted so far. This could start to provide a real interoperability framework for disparate archives.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:43.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>301<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-021<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>15/01/2020 20:02<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>An approach like this, which is rather more challenging than what has been attempted so far, could start to provide a real interoperability framework for federated and distributed archives.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:58.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>302<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-022<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>19/01/2020 22:11<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:58.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>These recommended changes will require some amount of work, but they will also make the document much more informative and useful. As it is now it is more descriptive, using lots of words, than it is prescriptive. The document could be moved in a more prescriptive direction while still dealing in abstractions and not directly implementable formalisms.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:43.5pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>303<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-023<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>19/01/2020 22:17<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:43.5pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>I like the use of UML and the inclusion of this brief introduction in the document. But I think that the addition of more specificity in these diagrams, such as adding at least operations, if not attributes, would make the descriptions even clearer.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:232.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:232.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>304<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:232.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-024<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:232.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>15/01/2020 20:07<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:232.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>The idea of "conformance with requirements" given the extremely vague language in sec 2.3 and 3.2 seems disjoint with the usual CCSDS notions of conformance, even with regard to reference models. There are materials in this document which could supply a much stronger framework for conformance, especially if the changes requested elsewhere in this set of RIDs are adopted. Even in their absence, requiring conformance also with Sec 4 would provide a much stronger "compliance" test than just sec 2.3 and 3.2.<br><br>The weak nature of "conformance", as specified, is further called into suspicion when there is language like this in Sec 6.2.7, pg 6-12:<br><br>"It should be noted that in the example and elsewhere whenever something is named as an OAIS, it is expected that anything that is spoken about as an OAIS conforms to the full suite of OAIS criteria specified in the conformance subsection (1.4)."<br><br>That phrase "conforms to the full suite of OAIS criteria" sounds really strong, but in reality it is not.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:29.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>305<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-025<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>16/01/2020 13:25<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Coverage of security topics, for all archives in general, and for federated archives in particular, should be identified as required practices. See also SEA-650x0-026.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:29.0pt'><td width=64 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:48.0pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>306<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=92 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:68.85pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>SEA-650x0-026<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=127 nowrap valign=bottom style='width:95.55pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right'><span style='color:black'>16/01/2020 13:20<o:p></o:p></span></p></td><td width=593 style='width:444.6pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;height:29.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:black'>Coverage of security topics, for all archives in general, and for cooperating and federated archives in particular, should be identified as required practices. See also SEA-650x0-025.<o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr></table><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><ol style='margin-top:0cm' start=3 type=1><li class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3'><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>OAIS-IF<o:p></o:p></span></li><ol style='margin-top:0cm' start=1 type=a><li class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo3'><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Steve circulated documents <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/x9g0we2yu56w1ik/02_White_Book_Recommended_Standard_OAIS-IF_Draft_191216%20v5.3%20NewSection3%20%281%29.doc?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/x9g0we2yu56w1ik/02_White_Book_Recommended_Standard_OAIS-IF_Draft_191216%20v5.3%20NewSection3%20%281%29.doc?dl=0</a> , <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/x07qnsit8suhhq1/index_0300%20%282%29.html?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/x07qnsit8suhhq1/index_0300%20%282%29.html?dl=0</a> and diagram <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/8jcyrm50h4i59ks/Information_Model_Package_200102.jpg?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/8jcyrm50h4i59ks/Information_Model_Package_200102.jpg?dl=0</a> and spreadsheet of MicroServices at <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/gstbbh2vk3uq2un/MicroServices_191210_Generalized.xlsx?dl=0">https://www.dropbox.com/s/gstbbh2vk3uq2un/MicroServices_191210_Generalized.xlsx?dl=0</a> <o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:18.0pt;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo3'><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>I set up a shared Google doc for concept papers relevant to OAIS-IF, which have both had text and concepts added<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol></ol><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:126.0pt;text-indent:-126.0pt;mso-text-indent-alt:-9.0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo3'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'><span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span>i.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>A concept paper on Provenance – see <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YCyhBZKRP7IWhArdI3MnwahjZY5K93UsDZq-cWApYeI/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YCyhBZKRP7IWhArdI3MnwahjZY5K93UsDZq-cWApYeI/edit?usp=sharing</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:126.0pt;text-indent:-126.0pt;mso-text-indent-alt:-9.0pt;mso-list:l0 level3 lfo3'><![if !supportLists]><span style='mso-list:Ignore'><span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span>ii.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span><![endif]><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>A concept paper on Representation Information - <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TcYIDKc9WMdyK1POSuitQjdWc5VtlL-YG8Qkt8c8V18/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TcYIDKc9WMdyK1POSuitQjdWc5VtlL-YG8Qkt8c8V18/edit?usp=sharing</a> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:90.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Regards<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></body></html>