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<p class="MsoNormal"><a name="_Hlk525895900">Dear DAI WG Team,<o:p></o:p></a></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">as discussed in the last Skype call, please find my list of comments or items to be checked in the final version of the OAIS reviewed document.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Please note that my comments are related to the
<b>printed out copy</b> of the version with file name “OAIS final v3 clean draft-20190904.docx” .<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">In the printed out copy there are still some comments of your changes.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page vii please check table of content in the printed out version<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page ix in the list of tables for table 4-1 an error bookmark not defined appears<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 1-6 add acronyms CPU (ref page 5-13), ID (ref page 5-4) , TAR (ref. page 4-35) , add TCP/IP, HTTP, USB (ref. page 6-2)<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 1-7 in 1.6.2 please check the Access Functional Entity definition with the first sentence in 4.1 (pages 4-1, 4-2) some incongruences exist like contains instead of provides
etc.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 1-8 please check Administration Functional Entity definition with the first sentence in 4.1 some incongruences exist like contains instead of provides etc.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US"> please check Archival Storage Functional Entity definition with the first sentence in 4.1 some incongruences exist like contains instead of provides etc.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 1-9 please check Data Management Functional Entity definition with the first sentence in 4.1 some incongruences exist like contains instead of provides etc.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 1-11 please check Ingest Functional Entity definition with the first sentence in 4.1 some incongruences exist like contains instead of provides etc.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 1-13 please check Preservation Planning Functional Entity definition with the first sentence in 4.1 some incongruences exist in the text<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 2-5 a comment appears near “schematically in figure 2-3”<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 2-7 an error appears near [D8] reference<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 3-3 please check the sentence Digital Migration issues are addressed more fully in 5.15.1 ( I have not found this paragraph in the document)<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 4-19 in the sentence “the Generate DIP …. “ change AIPS with AIPs.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 4-30 change the text between () from Subsection 5.2 (Preservation …) to Subsection 5.2 (Adding Representation Information)<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 4-33 in correspondence of reference D2 an error appears, the same in correspondence of the table in annex B<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 4-35 an error in the label of the Table -1 Examples of PDI appears<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 4-37 change Figure 4 14 in 4-14<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 5-14 the matrix is without number of table<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page 6-3 the sentence “Distributed
<u>Digital Preservation …” </u>why digital preservation appears as deleted?<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page D-1 in the printed out copy all the references from [D1] to [D9] have an error, only [D10] is correctly printed.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Page F-1 Again the reference to the CCSDS Information Report [D9] is displayed with an error.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US">Kind Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_Hlk525895900"><span lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></span></p>
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