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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-GB link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Hi Brigitte<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>You are too efficient <span style='font-family:"Segoe UI Emoji",sans-serif'>😉</span>.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I was circulating the text to the group to get consensus on the text before formally replying to you.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>However, to answer your question for BBh23 my proposal was to change the last 2 paragraphs of section 3.2.5 <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>From:<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:36.0pt'>A Long Term technology usage plan, updated as technology evolves, is essential to avoid being caught with very costly system maintenance, emergency system replacements, and costly data representation transformations.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:36.0pt'>The Archive should have a formal Succession Plan, contingency plans, and/or escrow arrangements in place in case the Archive ceases to operate or the governing or funding institution substantially changes its scope. The formal Succession Plan should include planning for how the AIPs will be findable once they have been moved to a successor repository.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>To:<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:36.0pt'>A Long Term technology usage plan, updated as technology evolves, is essential to avoid being caught with very costly system maintenance, emergency system replacements, and costly data representation transformations. The technology usage and staffing plans of the Archive will also be influenced by decisions of the Archive on such things as the Designated Communities and Preservation Objectives. There will be implications for the resources required by the Archive.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:36.0pt'>The Archive should have a formal Succession Plan, contingency plans, and/or escrow arrangements in place in case the Archive ceases to operate or the governing or funding institution substantially changes its scope. The formal Succession Plan should include planning for how the AIPs will be findable once they have been moved to a successor repository.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:36.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I hope that works for you.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal> <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>By the way, I must take this opportunity to say that your comments have been extremely helpful. You have clearly read the lengthy document very carefully and have certainly identified issues which we had not previously addressed but which, it is clear, are issues which are important for repositories and repository managers.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Regards<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> <b>On Behalf Of </b>Behal Brigitte<br><b>Sent:</b> 28 June 2019 18:01<br><b>To:</b> MOIMS-Data Archive Interoperability <moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org><br><b>Cc:</b> Sec-daj-d <Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr><br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Moims-dai] FW: Comments on OAIS V3<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Hello David</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>I am satisfied with your response to BBh22 and BBh36. I am not sure that I understand where you want to insert your new paragraph in response to BBh23. </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Could please provide me with more information ? (for instance, send me the text of the paragraph before your proposed insertion)</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>B. Behal</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Bpi 1625</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Tel: 73396 <br><br><br></span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'>De :</span></b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'> MOIMS-DAI <<a href="mailto:moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a>> <b>De la part de</b> David Giaretta<br><b>Envoyé :</b> vendredi 28 juin 2019 14:35<br><b>À :</b> MOIMS-DAI List <<a href="mailto:moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org">moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org</a>><br><b>Objet :</b> [Moims-dai] FW: Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>I’ve put some suggested text to respond to comments 22,23 and 36 in the appropriate rows in the spreadsheet. <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Let me know if you have any other suggestions.<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>> <br><b>Sent:</b> 28 June 2019 08:56<br><b>To:</b> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>>; 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>><br><b>Cc:</b> 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Hello David and John</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>You did a remarkable job dispositioning my comments. There are only 3 comments whose response does not seem completely satisfactory to me. These are BBh22, BBh23 & BBh36. You will find them in the file attached to this mail.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>I am at our disposal if you need more information about these comments.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Best regards</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>B. Behal</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Bpi 1625</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Tel: 73396 <br><br><br></span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'>De :</span></b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>> <br><b>Envoyé :</b> vendredi 7 juin 2019 13:11<br><b>À :</b> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Cc :</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Objet :</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Hi Brigitte<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Thanks for letting us know. If Mario has any comments in the next 2 weeks we will integrate responses and send them to you both.<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Regards<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>> <br><b>Sent:</b> 06 June 2019 18:29<br><b>To:</b> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>><br><b>Cc:</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Hello David</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>I will not be able to analyze your answers in the next 2 weeks. I come back to you end of June at the latest.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Best regards</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>B. Behal</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Bpi 1625</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Tel: 73396 </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'>De :</span></b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>> <br><b>Envoyé :</b> jeudi 6 juin 2019 17:31<br><b>À :</b> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Cc :</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Objet :</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Hi Brigitte<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Here is the DAI collected response to your comments. If these are OK with you and if Mario does not have any other comments then we consider the document ready for agency and ISO review.<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Regards<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>> <br><b>Sent:</b> 08 May 2019 17:29<br><b>To:</b> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>><br><b>Cc:</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Mario Merri <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Hello David,</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Please find my comments inserted in the attached file. My main points address:</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><ul style='margin-top:0cm' type=disc><li class=MsoNormal style='color:blue;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif'>The preservation objectives : it is a new feature you have added in this version, but it may have major impacts on the design of the OAIS and in this document, these objectives do not seem to be defined at the beginning of the development of the OAIS nor validated by Management, which concerns me.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=MsoNormal style='color:blue;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif'>the definitions that are not in line with the ones used by the SM&C WG and by other groups and should be reviewed</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>I remain at your disposal to discuss them.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Brigitte</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></body></html>