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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-GB link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>I’ve put some suggested text to respond to comments 22,23 and 36 in the appropriate rows in the spreadsheet. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Let me know if you have any other suggestions.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> Behal Brigitte <Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr> <br><b>Sent:</b> 28 June 2019 08:56<br><b>To:</b> David Giaretta <david@giaretta.org>; 'John Garrett' <garrett@his.com><br><b>Cc:</b> 'Mario Merri' <Mario.Merri@esa.int>; Sec-daj-d <Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr><br><b>Subject:</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>Hello David and John</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>You did a remarkable job dispositioning my comments. There are only 3 comments whose response does not seem completely satisfactory to me. These are BBh22, BBh23 & BBh36. You will find them in the file attached to this mail.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US>I am at our disposal if you need more information about these comments.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoPlainText><span lang=EN-US> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Best regards</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>B. Behal</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Bpi 1625</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Tel: 73396 <br><br><br></span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'>De :</span></b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>> <br><b>Envoyé :</b> vendredi 7 juin 2019 13:11<br><b>À :</b> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Cc :</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Objet :</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Hi Brigitte<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Thanks for letting us know. If Mario has any comments in the next 2 weeks we will integrate responses and send them to you both.<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Regards<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>> <br><b>Sent:</b> 06 June 2019 18:29<br><b>To:</b> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>><br><b>Cc:</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Hello David</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>I will not be able to analyze your answers in the next 2 weeks. I come back to you end of June at the latest.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Best regards</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>B. Behal</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Directrice des Achats, des Recettes externes et des Affaires juridiques</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Bpi 1625</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue;mso-fareast-language:FR'>Tel: 73396 </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'>De :</span></b><span lang=FR style='mso-fareast-language:FR'> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>> <br><b>Envoyé :</b> jeudi 6 juin 2019 17:31<br><b>À :</b> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Cc :</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Objet :</b> RE: Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Hi Brigitte<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Here is the DAI collected response to your comments. If these are OK with you and if Mario does not have any other comments then we consider the document ready for agency and ISO review.<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>Regards<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal>..David<span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='mso-fareast-language:EN-GB'> Behal Brigitte <<a href="mailto:Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr">Brigitte.Behal@cnes.fr</a>> <br><b>Sent:</b> 08 May 2019 17:29<br><b>To:</b> David Giaretta <<a href="mailto:david@giaretta.org">david@giaretta.org</a>><br><b>Cc:</b> 'John Garrett' <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>>; 'Thomas Gannett' <<a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a>>; 'Mario Merri' <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Mario Merri <<a href="mailto:Mario.Merri@esa.int">Mario.Merri@esa.int</a>>; Sec-daj-d <<a href="mailto:Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr">Sec-daj-d@cnes.fr</a>><br><b>Subject:</b> Comments on OAIS V3</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal> <span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Hello David,</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=FR style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Please find my comments inserted in the attached file. My main points address:</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><ul style='margin-top:0cm' type=disc><li class=MsoNormal style='color:blue;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif'>The preservation objectives : it is a new feature you have added in this version, but it may have major impacts on the design of the OAIS and in this document, these objectives do not seem to be defined at the beginning of the development of the OAIS nor validated by Management, which concerns me.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class=MsoNormal style='color:blue;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3'><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif'>the definitions that are not in line with the ones used by the SM&C WG and by other groups and should be reviewed</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>I remain at your disposal to discuss them.</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'> </span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma",sans-serif;color:blue'>Brigitte</span><span lang=FR><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></body></html>