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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Hi
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I think there has been a misunderstanding somewhere, since the version you commented Mark is a word document
</span><b><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red">from an old version</span></i></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">The version discussed on 14<sup>th</sup> of August is:
</span><a href="http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42" title="View the content of the attachment"><b>Section 6.1.5 10th of July 2018</b></a> (<a href="http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42">http://review.oais.info/attachment.cgi?id=42</a><span style="color:#1F497D">)</span>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">It was also noted that terms like Functional Entity … was to be changed to lower case and the references in the end should be removed.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Best regards, Eld<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="DA" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span lang="DA" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Mark Conrad<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, September 4, 2018 5:29 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> MOIMS-Data Archive Ingestion <moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Moims-dai] Marked up version of OAIS Section 6.1.5 - OO-IO Text<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please see the attached text with my comments. I have also posted this text as an attachment to SC 135 on the
<a href="http://review.oais.info">review.oais.info</a> site.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Mark Conrad<br>
NARA Information Services<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Systems Engineering Division (IT)<br>
The National Archives and Records Administration<br>
Erma Ora Byrd Conference and Learning Center<br>
Building 494, Room 225<br>
610 State Route 956<br>
Rocket Center, WV 26726<br>
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Phone: 304-726-7820<br>
Fax: 304-726-7802<br>
Email: <a href="mailto:mark.conrad@nara.gov" target="_blank">mark.conrad@nara.gov</a>
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