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On Aug 9, 2018, at 8:56 AM, D or C Sawyer <<a href="mailto:Sawyer@acm.org">Sawyer@acm.org</a>> wrote:<br>
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<div>I’m also totally opposed to changing ‘the original target of preservation’. I believe it is of very practical importance to be able to distinguish that information from other information being preserved.
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<div class="">On Aug 7, 2018, at 9:36 AM, Mark Conrad <<a href="mailto:mark.conrad@nara.gov" class="">mark.conrad@nara.gov</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div class="">1. I do not recall the group accepting David's suggested change to Content Information. I, for one, am strongly opposed to removing the reference to "the original target of preservation." If we do not have a term to refer to what we are trying
to preserve in the first place, the rest of the Reference Model is pretty much meaningless as far as I am concerned.</div>
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<div class="">2. In the NOTE for Representation Information there are two extra words - "enable use" at the end of the paragraph that should be removed.</div>
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<div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Aug 7, 2018 at 3:15 AM, John Garrett <span dir="ltr" class="">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d" class="">Hi All,<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d" class="">I’ve attached the current OAIS draft following last week’s call.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d" class="">Parts of Suggest Change SC#224 are marked as accepted (primarily in Terminology section.) There are still a number of items to consider for SC#224 (Find “SC#224 should allow you to find them). Hopefully
we can address them at today’s meeting. <u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d" class="">For SC#224, David attached an entire Section 5 based on the previous OAIS version and Mark (and others?) commented on it and David responded to his comments. I think I have annotated the current OAIS
with the current suggested updates and integrated the SC#224 updates with other SC updates. Please let me know you think I’ve dropped something along the way.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d" class="">Note that a number of Mark’s comments on David’s document were comments on text from the previous version text that David did not propose updating. Those comments are not included. I believe the agreement
was that if Mark felt strongly enough about updating text from the previous OAIS, then he would submit additional SCs.
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Also welcome to our new ESA participants.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d" class="">Peace and joy,<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d" class="">-JOhn<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
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<b class="">Subject:</b> [Moims-dai] Reminder of Skype call today (replaces the Webex call)<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="m_6356130646523022295MsoPlainText"><span style="" class="">Meeting: 10:00 Tuesday (EST) (1500 UK time, 1600 European time)
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<p class="m_6356130646523022295MsoPlainText">John has made a group on Skype for us to chat, share and collaborate.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="m_6356130646523022295MsoPlainText">Join it by clicking the link:<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
<p class="m_6356130646523022295MsoPlainText"><a href="https://join.skype.com/ykyu5SIPhSnD" target="_blank" class="">https://join.skype.com/<wbr class="">ykyu5SIPhSnD</a><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="m_6356130646523022295MsoPlainText">*Don't have Skype yet? Download it before you join
<a href="https://www.skype.com/" target="_blank" class="">https://www.skype.com</a><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">Suggested items for discussion for OAIS update</span>, based on dealing with ones which have not been discussed in a while, and on the dependencies which have been identified. These are
<u class="">all</u> the open issues so we need to resolve these to finalise the draft.<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">However, attendees should feel free to suggest ones to tackle first.<span style="" class="">
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<p class="MsoNormal">T<span style="" class="">he discussions for each item </span>
must<span style="" class=""> be time limited</span>.<span style="" class=""><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
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</span></span></span><u class=""></u><a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=224" target="_blank" class="">http://review.oais.info/show_<wbr class="">bug.cgi?id=224</a><span style="" class="">
</span>-this was discussed last week, working through the definitions and it is hoped to complete this at the meeting<span style="" class=""><u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
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</span></span></span><u class=""></u><a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=193" target="_blank" class="">http://review.oais.info/show_<wbr class="">bug.cgi?id=193</a><span style="" class=""> – depends on 224
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</span></span></span><u class=""></u><a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=198" target="_blank" class="">http://review.oais.info/show_<wbr class="">bug.cgi?id=198</a><span style="" class=""> – depends on 224<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
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</span></span><u class=""></u><a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=195" target="_blank" class="">http://review.oais.info/show_<wbr class="">bug.cgi?id=195</a> – depends on 224<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></p>
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</span></span></span><u class=""></u><a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=234" target="_blank" class="">http://review.oais.info/show_<wbr class="">bug.cgi?id=234</a><span style="" class=""> – objection to 222<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="" class="">..David<u class=""></u><u class=""></u></span></p>
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