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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-GB link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Hi Don<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>I’ve added a link to your document to the OAIS review site <a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=235">http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=235</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>The purpose of the site was to allow everyone – including those not on the MOIMS-DAI list - to see all comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>I added a comment:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'>I think your concerns are included in the other suggested changes, in particular <a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=115" title="CONFIRMED - Make the concept of understandability clearer by adding the concept of "preservation objectives"">http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=115</a> <o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'><o:p> </o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'>For example that proposed to change the definition of "Independently Understandable" to "Independently Understandable: A characteristic of information that is sufficiently complete to allow it to be interpreted, understood and used by the Designated Community, for example to achieve a set of Preservation Objectives, without having to resort to special resources not widely available, including named individuals."<o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'><o:p> </o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'>There were some concerns about "use" but I think that the intention has been maintained.<o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'><o:p> </o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'>You talk about "experience" - isn't this the same as RENDER the digital object and that rendering then experienced by a human. <o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'><o:p> </o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'>The Preservation Objectives are there to be more explicit about what the DC should be able to do.<o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'><o:p> </o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'>In terms of Information Objects and Representation Information - I think what perhaps needs to be explained is that to make up an Information Object one needs the Data Object and _enough_ Representation Information. If the Knowledge Base is enough then there is no "extra" Rep Info needed.<o:p></o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'><o:p> </o:p></span></pre><pre style='margin-left:36.0pt'><span style='font-family:"Calibri Light",sans-serif'>Therefore although you have written an interesting document I don't think we need to delay further work on the OAIS review, and probably should have been just a comment on <a href="http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=115" title="CONFIRMED - Make the concept of understandability clearer by adding the concept of "preservation objectives"">http://review.oais.info/show_bug.cgi?id=115</a><o:p></o:p></span></pre><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>..David<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US> MOIMS-DAI <moims-dai-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> <b>On Behalf Of </b>D or C Sawyer<br><b>Sent:</b> 16 May 2018 16:53<br><b>To:</b> MOIMS DAI List <moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org><br><b>Subject:</b> [Moims-dai] OAIS SC 235: OAIS Preservation Issues<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>All,<o:p></o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto'><span style='font-family:"Menlo Regular",serif;mso-fareast-language:JA'>After taking a more detailed look at digital preservation concepts than I did originally as a co-editor of the OAIS RM, I now find I missed an important aspect of information and its presentation to human senses. There is also an error in Representation Information modeling as it is not always an Information Object. This paper is my attempt to pull this together into what I hope is understandable and convincing.</span><o:p></o:p></p></div></div></body></html>