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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Hi,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I’m attaching what I have as the current OAIS draft.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I think all the Suggested Changes are shown and comments indicate which ones (about ½) are agreed.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>This should include all the SC#092 changes of ‘archive’ or ‘Archive’ to other words or cases where I thought it made sense. As requested, I left a number ‘archive’ in a number of places where I think it made sense such as when discussing differences between OAIS Archives and ‘traditional archives’, etc.<br>If there are any specific places where you feel the changes are inappropriate, let’s discuss it at an upcoming telecon.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Feel free to point out any changes that are needed.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Peace and joy,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>-JOhn<o:p></o:p></p></div></body></html>