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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body bgcolor=white lang=DE link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Good Morning,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>here comes a completed draft, i.e., a revision of our earlier incomplete draft in which an exemplar figure has been added.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Furthermore, we have addressed Terry’s comments, amongst others those important ones regarding the definition of a Functional Area as related to a Functional Entity. As the overall standard uses both terms in various places but never defines their relationship, we have defined it in such a way, that I a) makes sense now and b) does not require any changes in any other place of the standard.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Finally, the example that we have chosen is not deliberate but to some degree “representative” for many architectures of 3-tier-OAIS as they already exist in reality based on so-called model view controller architectures which are in widespread use in nowadays IT infrastructures. So we hope it will serve the purpose well.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Looking forward to your comments in our meeting in San Antonio on Tuesday.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Best regards<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Matthias Hemmje<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#1F497D'>-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br>FernUniversität Hagen Phone: +49-2331-987-304<br>Prof. Dr.-Ing. Matthias L. Hemmje Fax: +49-2331-987-4487<br>Universitätsstrasse 1 Email: Matthias.Hemmje@fernuni-hagen.de<br>D-58097 Hagen, Germany Web: <a href="http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/"><span style='color:blue'>http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/</span></a><br>-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------</span><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><a name="_MailEndCompose"><span style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'><o:p> </o:p></span></a></p><span style='mso-bookmark:_MailEndCompose'></span><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0cm 0cm 0cm'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span lang=EN-US style='color:windowtext'>From:</span></b><span lang=EN-US style='color:windowtext'> Terry Longstreth [mailto:terry.longstreth@comcast.net] <br><b>Sent:</b> Sonntag, 26. Februar 2017 07:09<br><b>To:</b> Matthias.Hemmje@fernuni-hagen.de<br><b>Cc:</b> MOIMS-Data Archive Ingestion <moims-dai@mailman.ccsds.org><br><b>Subject:</b> Comments on Hemmje-Engel draft os 6.1.5<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal>Moims-Dai, <br><br>I've made 2 or 3 wording changes to Matthias' submission, mostly to English syntax, but the bulk of my contribution is in comments associated with specific spots in the text. <br><br>I use LibreOffice on this machine, so my comments are in Open Document Text (ODT) format. Word should be able to open it (you might need to use Word's 'recovery' function). <br><br>Terry <br><br><br>On 2/21/2017 8:38 AM, Prof. Dr.-Ing. Matthias L. Hemmje wrote:<span style='font-size:12.0pt'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Hi,</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>together with my colleague Felix Engel, I have drafted a new text trying to capture the nature of Virtual Archives with Distributed Functional Areas or Entities. It still needs good example entities and a bit of polishing as it has been derived from 6.1.4 but maybe it is a good starting point for a new 6.1.5 including an additional figure in this area.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Maybe we can discuss this in todays meeting.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Best regards</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'>Matthias Hemmje</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span lang=EN-US style='color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;color:#1F497D'>-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br>FernUniversität Hagen Phone: +49-2331-987-304<br>Prof. Dr.-Ing. Matthias L. Hemmje Fax: +49-2331-987-4487<br>Universitätsstrasse 1 Email: <a href="mailto:Matthias.Hemmje@fernuni-hagen.de">Matthias.Hemmje@fernuni-hagen.de</a><br>D-58097 Hagen, Germany Web: <a href="http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/"><span style='color:blue'>http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/</span></a><br>-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US'> </span><o:p></o:p></p></blockquote><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'>-- <o:p></o:p></span></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif'><img border=0 width=339 height=142 style='width:3.5312in;height:1.4791in' id="_x0000_i1025" src="cid:image001.jpg@01D2C7C6.0159CC80"><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></body></html>