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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Moims-Dai, <br>
<br>
I've made 2 or 3 wording changes to Matthias' submission, mostly
to English syntax, but the bulk of my contribution is in comments
associated with specific spots in the text. <br>
<br>
I use LibreOffice on this machine, so my comments are in Open
Document Text (ODT) format. Word should be able to open it (you
might need to use Word's 'recovery' function). <br>
<br>
Terry <br>
<br>
<br>
On 2/21/2017 8:38 AM, Prof. Dr.-Ing. Matthias L. Hemmje wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Hi,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"
lang="EN-US">together with my colleague Felix Engel, I have
drafted a new text trying to capture the nature of Virtual
Archives with Distributed Functional Areas or Entities. It
still needs good example entities and a bit of polishing as
it has been derived from 6.1.4 but maybe it is a good
starting point for a new 6.1.5 including an additional
figure in this area.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"
lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"
lang="EN-US">Maybe we can discuss this in todays meeting.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"
lang="EN-US">Best regards<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="color:#1F497D;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"
lang="EN-US">Matthias Hemmje<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D" lang="EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;color:#1F497D">-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
FernUniversität Hagen Phone:
+49-2331-987-304<br>
Prof. Dr.-Ing. Matthias L. Hemmje Fax:
+49-2331-987-4487<br>
Universitätsstrasse 1 Email:
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:Matthias.Hemmje@fernuni-hagen.de">Matthias.Hemmje@fernuni-hagen.de</a><br>
D-58097 Hagen, Germany Web: <a
href="http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/" moz-do-not-send="true"><span
style="color:blue">http://www.fernuni-hagen.de/</span></a><br>
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------</span><span
style="color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
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