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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal>Hi All,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I’ve been working on generating a draft version of the OAIS that incorporates the updates suggested by the submitted Suggested Changes on the review web site. I think I’ve finally worked my way through and have at least made a notation in the attached draft for each of the Suggested Changes. <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Note: This is not an official draft from the Working Group. It is simply a tool I have created for myself to aid my review of the Suggested Changes. Hopefully, this can be useful to other members of the DAI Working Group as we work to update the OAIS.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I’ve attempted to include any text suggested by the submitter as mark up in the draft. I’ve also placed a comment to indicate which Suggested Change it came from. The comment starts with a single line indicating the Suggested Change Number, the name or initials of the submitter, and the initials of the person assigned to respond (currently almost always the default of David Giaretta(DG)). Eventually I suspect we will assign others.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>The following lines are the type of Suggested Change (Editorial, Update to add missing concept, Identify outdated material, etc.) and the status (almost always Confirmed, but hopefully moving to Resolved). Hopefully I got these copied correctly from the Suggested Change. Please note the Suggested Change on the web site is the ruling value. I’ve also tried to note where the text updates came from, usually from the Submitter as included in the Suggested Change (sc).<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>In some cases, I have suggested different wording and have tried to indicate that also. I’ve also taken the liberty of temporary including some of my comments and notes in the comment. As time allows, I intend to add those comments into the associated Suggested Change on the review web site. Please understand that these are in many cases my personal initial reaction and they in no way reflect the views of the DAI Working Group. They do however reflect my opinion before any extensive discussion on the issue within the group. I reserve the option to change my opinion on further thought and discussion. Since I’ve been involved since the first planning meeting for the original OAIS, hopefully I’ve also been able to provide some history and intent in some cases.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>I’ve also attaching a list breaking down the Suggested Changes in various ways. For example, how many SCs are there in each section (as identified in the SC itself).<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Peace and joy,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>-JOhn <o:p></o:p></p></div></body></html>