<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;">All,<div><br></div><div>I had made some suggested edits in my version of the document, through section 2, and I’ve incorporated them into John’s version. I think the main issue, which seems to be John’s as well, is how the document is currently addressing ‘areas’. It is attached below.</div><div><br></div><div>Cheers-</div><div>Don</div><div><br><div><div>On Oct 3, 2016, at 12:26 AM, John Garrett <<a href="mailto:garrett@his.com">garrett@his.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div lang="EN-US" link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72" style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Hi all,<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">I’ve attached a marked up version of the current draft of the Information Preservation Enabling Long-Term Use (IPELTU). We’re making good progress on this approach for the document, but we have to start spending more time on this to move it forward. As is to be expected, the earlier parts of the document are filling in nicely, but we need to continue onto the later sections of the document. Hopefully, we can all take a look and provide comments over the next couple of weeks so we can make some significant progress on this at the upcoming CCSDS technical meeting in 2 weeks.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Talk to you at the telecon on Tuesday.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Wishing you prosperity and peace,<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">-JOhn<o:p></o:p></div></div><span><6NNxN-M-0x6-ILF-20160906JGG.docx></span>_______________________________________________<br>MOIMS-DAI mailing list<br><a href="mailto:MOIMS-DAI@mailman.ccsds.org" style="color: rgb(149, 79, 114); text-decoration: underline;">MOIMS-DAI@mailman.ccsds.org</a><br><a href="https://mailman.ccsds.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/moims-dai" style="color: rgb(149, 79, 114); text-decoration: underline;">https://mailman.ccsds.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/moims-dai</a></div></blockquote><br></div></div></body></html>