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    Your suggested changes look good to me, David.<br>
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    Thanks,<br>
    <br>
    Bob<br>
    <br>
    Robert R. Downs, PhD<br>
    Senior Digital Archivist and Senior Staff Associate Officer of
    Research<br>
    Acting Head of Cyberinfrastructure and Informatics Research and
    Development<br>
    Center for International Earth Science Information Network (CIESIN),<br>
    The Earth Institute, Columbia University<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2/23/2016 12:51 PM, David Giaretta
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        <p class="MsoNormal">Changes to the last paragraph of the draft
          response  were suggested in the call and Mike Kearney emailed
          a suggestion to append some text to be a little more open.<o:p></o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal">I therefore propose the following change,
          replacing the last para with<o:p></o:p></p>
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              style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New
              Roman",serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Taking
              distributed archives as an example, which are mentioned in
              the original post as being beyond OAIS. We noted above
              that mapping PDS to OAIS indicates that this is not true
              and the core concepts of OAIS do apply. It may be sensible
              to create new standards for the implementation of
              distributed archives, for example to define new ways to
              implement federations or special storage systems. This
              would not in itself imply changes to OAIS.<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-add-space:auto;line-height:normal"><b><span
              style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New
              Roman",serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">As noted at
              the start, OAIS is scheduled for review/revision in 2017.
              It will be important to collect ideas/comments/corrections
              but it is essential to distinguish between changes in OAIS
              itself versus suggestions for new, separate, standards. 
              Our comments indicate that the points made in the original
              post fall in the latter category. However, if there are
              other new considerations, or if you feel we didn’t
              understand your post, we would be happy to discuss this. 
              <o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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            style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New
            Roman",serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Please let me
            know what you think.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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