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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Hi Colin,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Some comments from Peter for the FR Magenta Book. Can you have a look? I think we will not be able to discuss it during the Spring Meeting, we will need to discuss in
a telecon after the meeting.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Holger<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From:
</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, 9. May 2023 at 19:39<br>
<b>To: </b>Holger Dreihahn <Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int>, Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [EXTERNAL] Re: Comments on the FRM doc<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Sorry. Thought I had attached it. Too quick on the trigger.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">I just embedded comments in the PDF file. Did not create separate PIDs.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Peter</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From:
</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Holger Dreihahn <Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, May 8, 2023 at 12:14 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Peter Shames <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov>, Erik Barkley <erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] Re: Comments on the FRM doc</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Hello Peter,</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Can you send us your PIDs for assessment?</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Regards,</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt">Holger</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From:
</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Date: </b>Sunday, 7. May 2023 at 23:45<br>
<b>To: </b>Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov>, Holger Dreihahn <Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Comments on the FRM doc</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-ligatures:standardcontextual">Erik and Holger,</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-ligatures:standardcontextual">I read through the FRM book, or at least the first 43 pages of it. I found a lot to like, and also a number of issues that prevent me from giving it my immediate
blessing. I wanted you to be aware of these and to have them available in case you wanted to address them during our working meetings. Check the Poll conditions.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-ligatures:standardcontextual"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-ligatures:standardcontextual">I hope you find this feedback to be constructive, it was intended to be. I think the FRM has a lot to offer, but that not all of the concepts are as clearly articulated
as they might be. </span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-ligatures:standardcontextual">Let me know if you wish to discuss any of this. I will make time available.</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-ligatures:standardcontextual">Best regards, Peter</span><span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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