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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Dear Wolfgang,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I have reviewed your proposed Technical Corrigendum (TC). Here are my comments. But before getting into the specific comments one thing that immediately jumped
out is that the TC is loaded with cross references that break (<b>ERROR! Reference source not found</b>) when the document is printed 9which is what I did). They will also likely break when transformed into the CCSDS TC. The attached copy has the cross references
locked (accomplished by CTRL-A followed by CTRL-F11). Also, there was some formatting markup that I “accepted”. However, the attached does not include the specific recommendations that I make below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">1.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">The update for page 4-2, paragraph 4.3.11 – “Add the following new item to the list: a) in the introductory paragraph of the statement: …”. The “additional”
sentences are in fact a combination of new material and modifications of existing sentences in the “boilerplate”, so it’s not obvious how and where it is to be added. Also, the semi-colon between the “to-be-added” statement and the NOTE is confusing and I
don’t think belongs there. I suggest that the whole paragraph be replaced, i.e., the entry for this TC item would read<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:1.0in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><br>
</span><span style="font-size:14.0pt">Page 4-2, paragraph 4.3.11<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:1.0in"><i><span style="font-size:14.0pt">Add the following new item a) to the list:<o:p></o:p></span></i></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:1.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">a)<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]>Replace the introductory paragraph with the following paragraph: “The following publications contain provisions which, through reference in this text, constitute provisions of this document. At the time of publication, the editions
indicated were valid. It is important to note that the edition of the <i>Cross Support Transfer Service—Specification Framework</i> that is named in this subsection<span style="mso-fareast-language:JA"> is the only edition that can be used as a source of
requirements for this edition of this Cross Support Transfer Service Recommended Standard.
</span>All other publications in the list are subject to revision, and users of this document are encouraged to investigate the possibility of applying the most recent editions of the publications (other than the Specification Framework) indicated below. The
CCSDS Secretariat maintains a register of currently valid CCSDS publications.”<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:1.25in"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:2.0in;text-indent:-.75in">NOTE – In the CSTS Specification Framework (reference [1]), procedure version numbers are increased as soon as there are changes to those procedures, but only then. Consequently different
CSTS Specification Framework editions may contain the same version of a given procedure type. One CSTS specification is bound to one specific edition of the CSTS Specification Framework and consequently only the procedure versions and ASN.1 module versions
specified in that edition can be used for the specification of that CSTS.<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D"><br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">2.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">This is a perhaps just an academic question, but is it possible that a “new” CSTS specification could be written using a previous version of the SFW,
e.g., to use a feature that was somehow eliminated by an update? Is so, then perhaps bullet b) under section 4.3.11 of the Guidelines should say “</span>the version of the CSTS Specification Framework Recommended Standard that is
<span style="color:red">applicable to</span> the CSTS Specification Recommended Standard” instead of “the version of the CSTS Specification Framework Recommended Standard that is
<span style="color:red">in effect when </span>the CSTS Specification <span style="color:red">
becomes a</span> Recommended Standard”.<br>
<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%">Alternatively, if we assume that in such a case the SFW would be updated again to add back the needed functionality
such that the “current’ version of the SFW is indeed applicable, then the wording can remain as it is.<br>
<br>
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">3.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%">With the insertion of the new 4.10.3, the section numbers will advance for
the subsequent sections. I got confused when trying to cross check the TC against the version of the Guidelines with the changes integrated into them, because the renumbering took place. Perhaps some clarification can be added to the labels along the lines
of:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%">the label “Page 4-30, paragraph 4.10.3.1” could be “Page 4-30, paragraph
4.10.3.1 (now renumbered to 4.10.4.1)”;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%">the label “Page 4-30, paragraph 4.10.3.2” could be “Page 4-30, paragraph
4.10.3.1 (now renumbered to 4.10.4.2)”;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:.75in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%">the label “Page 4-31, paragraph 4.10.3.5” could be “Page 4-30, paragraph
4.10.3.1 (now renumbered to 4.10.4.5)”; <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:.75in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%">“4.10.3.5” should be “4.10.4.5”; and<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%">the label “Page 4-31, subsection 4.10.7” could be “Page 4-30, subsection
4.10.7 (now renumbered to 4.10.8)”<br>
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<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo1"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">4.<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%">Similarly, with the reorganization of subsections under 4.11.3:
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the word „and“ to the end of of item c)</span></i><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">
</span></i><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">of the list<span style="color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%">” has a repeated “of”. [I also note the German(?) opening double quotation
mark (</span>„and“) which I assume Tom G. will anglicize in the final TC.]</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-color:#203864;mso-style-textfill-fill-alpha:100.0%"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">John<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> CSS-CSTS <css-csts-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 10, 2019 9:39 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> CCSDS_CSTSWG(css-csts@mailman.ccsds.org) <css-csts@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Css-csts] Fw: Draft Technical Corrigendum of the Guidelines<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Dear CSTS WG Colleague,</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Pleas have a look at Wolfgang's message below.</span>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Regards,</span> <br>
<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Holger</span> <br>
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<span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Holger Dreihahn<br>
European Spacecraft Operations Centre | European Space Agency | S-431<br>
+49 6151 90 2233 | </span><a href="http://www.esa.int/esoc"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">http://www.esa.int/esoc</span></a>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:purple">----- Forwarded by Holger Dreihahn/esoc/ESA on 10/07/2019 15:37 -----</span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">From: </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"Wolfgang Hell" <<a href="mailto:whell@gmx.de">whell@gmx.de</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">To: </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">"<a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int">Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int</a>" <<a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int">Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int</a>></span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Date: </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">10/07/2019 11:58</span>
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<span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:#5F5F5F">Subject: </span><span style="font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Fwd: Fwd: Draft Technical Corrigendum of the Guidelines</span>
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Once again my original email has bounced ... <o:p></o:p></p>
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-------- Weitergeleitete Nachricht -------- <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Wed, 10 Jul 2019 11:42:43 +0200 <o:p></o:p></p>
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Hi Holger,<br>
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Please forward the message below to the CSTS WG. Thanks.<br>
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Dear All,<br>
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in response to the action items I took during the Spring Meet related to the Guidelines document I have now drafted a Technical Corrigendum (attached). I would appreciate a sanity check by the WG members before we make this an official request. The Technical
Corrigendum may be somewhat difficult to review, among others because of the changes in section / paragraph numbers which have occurred due to some of the necessary corrections. To make the review easier, I'm attaching also the Guidelines document modified
in accordance with the proposed Technical Corrigendum. Thank you in advance for your feedback.<br>
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Best regards,<br>
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Wolfgang<br>
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