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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Hi Erik,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">As long as we use this “map” to locate each of our Areas of work in the minds of the viewers I don’t think it really matters what color you choose. But whatever you each choose
just needs to mark the “map of the Area” clearly enough. It is, after all, just an approximation to direct their attention.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Flashing neon green usually works well for catching people’s attention, but I don’t think that’s an “out of the box” Powerpoint option. Whatever color you choose, you could,
of course, approximate that by using the “blink” option in the Animation Pane, and setting it to 3 blinks of ½ second each. That’s eye catching and quick.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Cheers, Peter<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, April 24, 2024 at 6:17</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov>, Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de <Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de>, cesg@mailman.ccsds.org <cesg@mailman.ccsds.org><br>
<b>Cc: </b>AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com <AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com>, Asmar, Sami W (US 9100) <sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Subject: </b>RE: Updated CSS Area slides for Lunar Interop Forum<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">I think it works on Peter's diagram as he has essentially bright yellow on a darker gray pretty much all the way around. If you try using a bright yellow line on a white background it tends to get lost. I
find that sticking with the area color works pretty well for what I have. I would be open to using a dashed black line to make this obvious. Otherwise I'm not so sure that this really matters so much?</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">-Erik</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov>
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<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, April 24, 2024 15:44<br>
<b>To:</b> Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de; Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov>; cesg@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Cc:</b> AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com; Asmar, Sami W (US 9100) <sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: Updated CSS Area slides for Lunar Interop Forum</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Glad it worked. I’d like to suggest that we all adopt this same pattern, just for consistency and clarity.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Thanks, Peter</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">From:
</span></b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black"><a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a> <<a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, April 24, 2024 at 11:58</span><span lang="DE" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><span lang="DE" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <<a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>, Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <<a href="mailto:erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov">erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>,
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<b>Cc: </b><a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a> <<a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a>>, Asmar, Sami W (US 9100) <<a href="mailto:sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov">sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] AW: Updated CSS Area slides for Lunar Interop Forum</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Peter,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">yes this new version with yellow boxed looks better to me. I’ll use this, thank you for the support.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Tomaso</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt">Von:</span></b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt"> Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <<a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>
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<b>Gesendet:</b> Mittwoch, 24. April 2024 18:00<br>
<b>An:</b> de Cola, Tomaso <<a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a>>; Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <<a href="mailto:erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov">erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>;
<a href="mailto:cesg@mailman.ccsds.org">cesg@mailman.ccsds.org</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a>; Asmar, Sami W (US 9100) <<a href="mailto:sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov">sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<b>Betreff:</b> Re: Updated CSS Area slides for Lunar Interop Forum</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Dear Tomaso,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">I agree with you about both the “psychedelic” aspects and the need for words. When I sketched these “domains” I took the easy way out and just used the same colors as the Area,
but it did not seem best to me either.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">I’ve attached a revision that might work better. I tried out a few contrasting colors and think this sort of bright yellow might be the best of the lot. It draws attention
and doesn’t fight with the other colors. Hopefully it is also not too “psychedelic”.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">As for the “words” part, that is up to each of us. When I present the animated chart I’ll quickly point out the features of each area and their extent. When you present your
Area you get to reinforce the domain of services in whatever way best suits the point you are making in the context of lunar interoperability.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">I think that will work.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Best regards, Peter</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">From:
</span></b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black"><a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a> <<a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, April 24, 2024 at 12:21</span><span lang="DE" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><span lang="DE" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">AM<br>
<b>To: </b>Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <<a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>, Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <<a href="mailto:erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov">erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>,
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<b>Cc: </b><a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a> <<a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a>>, Asmar, Sami W (US 9100) <<a href="mailto:sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov">sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Peter,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">conceptually I agree with you, since the additional boxes you added in the two charts give the full extension of CSS and SIS. What I’m a bit scared of is that we end up in “psychedelic” picture with so many
colours overlapping that could make the understanding even more difficult. Probably boxes (or polygons) in a different colour could work better. I’m however still convinced that a verbal description would make everything much clearer.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">@Erik: what do you think?</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Tomaso</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt">Von:</span></b><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt"> Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <<a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov">peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>
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<b>Gesendet:</b> Dienstag, 23. April 2024 23:48<br>
<b>An:</b> Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <<a href="mailto:erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov">erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>; de Cola, Tomaso <<a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a>>;
<a href="mailto:cesg@mailman.ccsds.org">cesg@mailman.ccsds.org</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a>; Asmar, Sami W (US 9100) <<a href="mailto:sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov">sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<b>Betreff:</b> Re: Updated CSS Area slides for Lunar Interop Forum</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">I get the issue that both Tomaso and Erik have brought up.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">I will point out that because we are using the animated graphic there will be time (albeit brief) to address the coverage issue up front.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">And you could, if you wished to do a little “chartsmanship”, add extensions from the core CSS and SIS “lanes” to incorporate more of the “territory” that is covered. Might look
like pgs 12 (SIS) & 13 (CSS) in the attached update to my slides.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif">Cheers, Peter</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">CESG <<a href="mailto:cesg-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">cesg-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a>> on behalf of Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) via CESG <<a href="mailto:cesg@mailman.ccsds.org">cesg@mailman.ccsds.org</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, April 23, 2024 at 10:22</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Aptos",sans-serif;color:black">AM<br>
<b>To: </b><a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a> <<a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a>>,
<a href="mailto:cesg@mailman.ccsds.org">cesg@mailman.ccsds.org</a> <<a href="mailto:cesg@mailman.ccsds.org">cesg@mailman.ccsds.org</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b><a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a> <<a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a>>, Asmar, Sami W (US 9100) <<a href="mailto:sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov">sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] Re: [CESG] Updated CSS Area slides for Lunar Interop Forum</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hello Tomaso,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you for the inputs. I will make the editorial changes as you have suggested and as we agreed at the CESG meeting earlier today. Regarding the separation of the areas with regard to the "Kearney graphic"
I would argue that even for the CSS area the nice little boundary is not quite so. And I noted this when putting the slide together and had already planned to make a verbal remark about the mission operations center in fact actually being in the diagram insomuch
as it interfaces with the various agency ground communication stations which is not shown when it sliced up the way it is on the picture. But I think ultimately the picture is good enough to help the audience navigate the different areas it about which we
will be speaking.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">-Erik</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">
<a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a> <<a href="mailto:Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de">Tomaso.deCola@dlr.de</a>>
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<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, April 23, 2024 2:23<br>
<b>To:</b> Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) <<a href="mailto:erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov">erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov</a>>;
<a href="mailto:cesg@mailman.ccsds.org">cesg@mailman.ccsds.org</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a>; Asmar, Sami W (US 9100) <<a href="mailto:sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov">sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] AW: Updated CSS Area slides for Lunar Interop Forum</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Erik,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">thank you for sharing the slides.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Just a few editorial comments (maybe relevant also for the other area slides):</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">In the cover slide, I’d add “(CSS)” after “Cross Support Services Area”, since CSS is then used in the following slide.</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">On Slide 3, on the top-right corner there is again the picture from slide 2, where only the CSS area is highlighted. I’m wondering whether this is really
needed, since the picture is quite small (ok it will be displayed on a huge display I guess) and as such not so much readable. Moreover, we have presented the CCSDS area sketch already in the previous slide and as such I’m not sure repeating it here will give
any added value.</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Just a note on the famous picture on slide 2, the separation of applicability contexts for CSS, SOIS, and SLS areas is quite clear, as it corresponds to the vertical boxes all with different colours. For SIS
and MOIMS as well (I’d say), it is not really like this. If you check the lines indicated in the picture, the red (MOIMS) and magenta (SIS) the are almost e2e from the onboard assets until the final users. As such, probably this aspect should be made clear
verbally by SIS and MOIMS during the presentation just to avoid misunderstanding.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Concerning SIS slides, they will come in a few hours.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Talk to you all later today,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Tomaso</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Von:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> CESG <<a href="mailto:cesg-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org">cesg-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org</a>>
<b>Im Auftrag von </b>Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) via CESG<br>
<b>Gesendet:</b> Montag, 22. </span><span lang="DE" style="font-size:11.0pt">April 2024 21:17<br>
<b>An:</b> <a href="mailto:cesg@mailman.ccsds.org">cesg@mailman.ccsds.org</a><br>
<b>Cc:</b> Massaquoi, Amber S <<a href="mailto:AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com">AMassaquoi@asrcfederal.com</a>>; Asmar, Sami W (US 9100) <<a href="mailto:sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov">sami.w.asmar@jpl.nasa.gov</a>><br>
<b>Betreff:</b> [CESG] Updated CSS Area slides for Lunar Interop Forum</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">CESG Colleagues,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Based on the updated slides between Ignacio and Peter last week, attached please find an updated set of slides for the CSS area. I look forward to an interesting discussion tomorrow.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">-Erik</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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