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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">Dear CESG Colleagues,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">At the July 18 meeting I agreed to take a look at the spreadsheet that Peter prepared and to check the PIDs listed therein against the latest MAL document. Essentially to perform a review of the
review. Accordingly, please see the attached spreadsheet.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">My conclusion is that, on balance, there does indeed need to be some revision of the document prior to agency review. Having said that, I will note, that as I was on vacation and did not participate
in the vote, these are of course not any kind of conditions but rather hopefully some assistance in sorting out the PIDs that were recorded for the vote. To be more specific, my findings can be summarized as:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">Terminology is used in multiple senses in different parts of the document and/or not defined in the terminology section; this tends to lead
some definitions that are circular (e.g., “…attribute extends ‘Attribute’…”)<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">The PICs proforma is not properly stated (see comments in the spreadsheet)<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">It seems that some sort of requirements on the transport layer should be stated<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">Cybersecurity needs to be addressed<o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">I will also note there are some of the PIDs where I think Peter stated some things incorrectly and/or I did not really see the issue. Perhaps this is a case where the definition of success is getting
everybody angry at you :-)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">-Erik <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">Ps, the spreadsheet has also been uploaded to the CWE space used for the July 18 meeting.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> CESG <cesg-bounces@mailman.ccsds.org> <b>On Behalf Of
</b>Barkley, Erik J (US 3970) via CESG<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, July 18, 2022 12:25<br>
<b>To:</b> Shames, Peter M (US 312B) <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><br>
<b>Cc:</b> cesg@mailman.ccsds.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] [CESG] MAL PIDs spreadsheet<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">Hello Peter,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">As you may recall, I volunteered to take a look at the MO MAL Agency Review CESG Poll PIDs and check them against the latest MAL document. I see the presentation, dated July 11 in the CWE for CESG,
but I do not find the spreadsheet there. Can you please either send or (probably better) post the spreadsheet? Thank you.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif">Best regards, <o:p>
</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif">Erik Barkley<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif">Cross Support Services Area Director<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif">Consultative Committee for Space Data Systems<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif"><a href="https://urldefense.us/v3/__http:/www.ccsds.org/__;!!PvBDto6Hs4WbVuu7!Y0McA6Xa7qWSD4GzCyzGhggymTsKhLx6dMHJiWUY4A3Ly3w10ibGmgeOXvMf5Lrq9nyAxLFrYw$">www.ccsds.org</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Georgia",serif">+1 818.393.4972<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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