<span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Peter, </span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">
sorry for being picky, but - as the footnote was
not there at CESG Poll Time - YOUR solution is to change YOUR disposition
to add nothing.</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">This is perfectly
OK with withdrawing my useless PID and leaving you the option to do whatever
you like.</span>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:sans-serif">Gian Paolo.</span>
<br>
<br>
<br>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">From:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Shames,
Peter M (US 312B)" <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">To:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int"
<Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Cc:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">"Tom
Gannett" <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>, "CCSDS CESG --"
<cesg@mailman.ccsds.org></span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Date:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">02-07-20
00:32</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:sans-serif">Subject:
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:sans-serif">Re:
[EXTERNAL] Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review</span>
<br>
<hr noshade>
<br>
<br>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">Gippo,</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">Sorry
if it felt like a "game". That was never our intent. Having
looked back into the history of the RID/PID processing I now recall what
occurred. It if obvious, in retrospect, that we seem to have gotten
some wires crossed within the SAWG in how the agreed resolution was translated
into the final text.</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">The
agreed resolution was as you showed it. I.e.</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">Accept,
with mods</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">From:
Existing text</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;color:#008250;font-family:Calibri"><b><i>To:
There is no sensible EPP binding for MAL, but it could appear in a protocol
diagram (or note) relative to CFDP or DTN</i></b></span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">Please
note that this text, as agreed by the SAWG, did not say "Add a footnote".
What it did say was "there is no sensible binding for EPP".
Unfortunately, when Roger Thompson encountered this he read it as
"insert a footnote", and he did so. That was an error,
and was not what was intended. I guess we could have been clearer
and just rejected your PID outright at the time, based on that technical
assertion.</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">As
stated earlier, the fix is to remove the footnote. We will do that
promptly. Sorry for any confusion and thanks for agreeing to withdraw
the PID.</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">Thanks,
Peter</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"><b>From:
</b>Gian Paolo Calzolari <Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int><b><br>
Date: </b>Wednesday, July 1, 2020 at 3:08 PM<b><br>
To: </b>Peter Shames <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><b><br>
Cc: </b>Tom Gannett <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net>, CCSDS Engineering
Steering Group - CESG Exec <cesg@mailman.ccsds.org><b><br>
Subject: </b>Re: [EXTERNAL] Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial">Peter,</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
Just to be clear:</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
1) I make a PID based on 371x0g0_CESG_Approval.pdf that never mentions
EPP</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
2) YOU send me a disposition that says PID accepted with modification and
propose to add a footnote (as visible in 371x0g0_PID dispositions 23June20
accept-ps.pdf)</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
3) I say that I accept this disposition and I just I ask to follow good
practice referencing the document</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
4) YOU reply that "</span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">the
correct fix for this is to remove that footnote</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial">",
i.e. the opposite of YOUR disposition</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
<br>
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
Sorry, this is a game I am not ready to play.</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
<br>
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
I copy CESG to confirm that my PID is withdrawn.</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
<br>
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
Regards</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> <br>
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
Gian Paolo</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> <br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
From: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Shames,
Peter M (US 312B)" <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov></span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
To: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int"
<Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int></span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Cc: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Tom
Gannett" <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net></span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Date: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">01-07-20
21:30</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Subject: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">Re:
[EXTERNAL] Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span></p>
<div align=center>
<hr noshade></div>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:240px"><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">Thanks
Gippo.</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">Peter</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"><b>From:
</b>Gian Paolo Calzolari <Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int><b><br>
Date: </b>Wednesday, July 1, 2020 at 12:06 PM<b><br>
To: </b>Peter Shames <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><b><br>
Cc: </b>Tom Gannett <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net><b><br>
Subject: </b>Re: [EXTERNAL] Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review</span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial">Peter,
I withdraw my PID.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
Do whatever you like</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
<br>
Gian Paolo</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
<br>
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
<br>
From: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Shames,
Peter M (US 312B)" <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov></span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
To: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int"
<Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int></span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Cc: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Tom
Gannett" <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net></span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Date: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">01-07-20
20:53</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Subject: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">Re:
[EXTERNAL] Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span></p>
<div align=center>
<hr noshade></div>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:3600px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">Dear Gippo,</span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">I really wish
to avoid misunderstandings. There was never a reference to EPP in
this document. A mention of it was added, but only in a footnote
in sec 7.3.2, on pg 7-5, in response to your original PID. This was
to clarify, for you, that there is no binding for EPP, only for SPP. </span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">I think the
correct fix for this is to remove that footnote, since that is the only
point at which EPP is mentioned at all.</span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">Is that clear?</span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">Thanks, Peter</span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style=";margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"><b>From: </b>Gian
Paolo Calzolari <Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int><b><br>
Date: </b>Wednesday, July 1, 2020 at 11:23 AM<b><br>
To: </b>Peter Shames <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><b><br>
Cc: </b>Tom Gannett <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net><b><br>
Subject: </b>Re: [EXTERNAL] Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review</span></p>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span>
<br><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial">Peter, <br>
I think there is a misunderstanding and I do not go
further reading about 524.1-B.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
To avoid polemics and to save energy, I am accepting your change as shown
in the snapshot.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
</span><img src=cid:_1_0A25CC680A25C70400344138C1258599 width=989 height=105 style="border:0px solid;"><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
Since this change mentions a CCSDS blue book, it is "good practice"
IMO to add the reference to the book.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
In a blue book this reference would be added in the informative annex,
in a green this option is not available.</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
So simple, editorial completion. No hidden purpose, <br>
<br>
Ciao</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
<br>
Gian Paolo</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> <br>
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
<br>
<br>
From: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Shames,
Peter M (US 312B)" <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov></span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
To: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int"
<Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int></span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Cc: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Tom
Gannett" <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net></span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Date: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">01-07-20
19:18</span><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Subject: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">Re:
[EXTERNAL] Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review</span><span style=" font-size:12pt">
</span>
<div align=center>
<hr noshade></div>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">Hi Gippo,</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">Thanks for taking the time to review
the revisions to the spec. I appreciate your diligence in this regard.</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">I do, however, have an issue with your
request in regards this PID. I completely understand your desire
to add a reference to the EPP, in addition to the existing reference to
the SPP. This would appear to be a simple, parallel, sort of change
and in many other circumstances would be easy to agree to. But in
this case I do not think this is technically viable.</span>
<br><span style=" font-size:12pt"><br>
I draw your attention to the requirement, within the MO MAL, for there
to be a documented "technology binding". There is no existing,
documented, technology binding for the EPP, only for the SPP. If
you will look in the CCSDS 524x1b1, the " MISSION OPERATIONS—MAL
SPACE PACKET TRANSPORT BINDING AND BINARY ENCODING" you will only
find a reference to the SPP, CCSDS 133x0b1. There is no mention of
EPP. Furthermore, that MAL SPP binding includes a very complicated
diagram showing how the fields of the MAL abstract message are to be mapped
to the SPP fields, including primary header and extended secondary header.
I attach that diagram here. <br>
Since this relies on mapping the MO MAL fields to the APID and also to
a specific secondary header, neither of which the EPP has, and there is
no documented binding for EPP, I do not see how we can accept this. This
is not to say that an EPP binding could not be developed, just that there
is not now one and creation of one seems unlikely. <br>
I hope you concur. <br>
Thanks, Peter </span>
<p style="X█0■(´;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style="X█0■(´;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"><b>From:
</b>Gian Paolo Calzolari <Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int><b><br>
Date: </b>Wednesday, July 1, 2020 at 9:39 AM<b><br>
To: </b>Peter Shames <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov><b><br>
Cc: </b>Tom Gannett <thomas.gannett@tgannett.net><b><br>
Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] Re: Final edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review</span></p>
<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"><br>
</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
Peter,</span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
The disposition to my PID satisfies the condition if the
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt">Encapsulation Packet Protocol</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial">
is also added among reference documents in section 1.6 (where SPP is already
mentioned with superseded version 1).</span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
<br>
Regards</span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span><span style=" font-size:10pt;font-family:Arial"><br>
<br>
Gian Paolo</span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"> <br>
</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"><br>
</span><img src=cid:_1_0E44009C0E43F8BC00344138C1258599 style="border:0px solid;"><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
<br>
<br>
<br>
From: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Shames,
Peter M (US 312B)" <peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov></span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
To: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"SEA-SA"
<sea-sa@mailman.ccsds.org></span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Cc: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">"Gian
Paolo Calzolari" <Gian.Paolo.Calzolari@esa.int>, "Erik
Barkley" <barkleye@pacbell.net>, "Dan Smith" <danford.s.smith@nasa.gov>,
"Berry, David S (US 3920)" <david.s.berry@jpl.nasa.gov>,
"'Prochazka, Marek (JSC-OA111)[EUROPEAN SPACE AGENCY]'" <marek.prochazka@esa.int>,
"'Hickey, Joseph P. (GSFC-582.0)[VANTAGE SYSTEMS INC]'" <joseph.p.hickey@nasa.gov>,
"Wilmot, Jonathan J. (GSFC-5820)" <jonathan.j.wilmot@nasa.gov>,
"Mario Merri" <Mario.Merri@esa.int>, "'Xionwen He'"
<hexw501@hotmail.com>, "Poole, Eric L. (GSFC-5990)" <eric.l.poole@nasa.gov></span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Date: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">23-06-20
23:25</span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;color:#5f5f5f;font-family:Arial"><br>
Subject: </span><span style=" font-size:9pt;font-family:Arial">Final
edits of ASL ADD GB ready for review</span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span></p>
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<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"><br>
</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"><br>
Dear SEA SAWG and other ASL reviewers,</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
</span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"><br>
</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span><span style=" font-size:12pt;font-family:Calibri"><br>
The three editors of the ASL ADD GB (Krosley, Thompson, Shames) have completed
our work of updating the document to resolve issues raised in the CESG
review and also issues raised by other reviewers. All of these files
are now out in the SEA SA CWE area. The final document, in Word and
PDF form, is to be found here:</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
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</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri"> </span><span style=" font-size:11pt;color:blue;font-family:Calibri"><u><br>
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The separate files of revised figures for the SO materials are in that
folder as well. The files of revised figures for the MO materials
are in a separate location:</span><span style=" font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri">
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<br><span style=" font-size:12pt">A version of the Word doc that has track
changes on (371x0g0_PID dispositions 22June20 track final) is to be found
in the following folder along with other work products including the tracking
spreadsheet where we recorded the SAWG resolutions and the final status:</span>
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<p style="PýıFýıÇ(´;margin-Bottom:0px"><a href="https://cwe.ccsds.org/sea/docs/Forms/AllItems.aspx?RootFolder=%2Fsea%2Fdocs%2FSEA%2DSA%2FDraft%20Documents%2FApp%20%2D%20Support%20Layer%20Green%20Book%2FASL%20ADD%20Review%20inputs%20%2D%20resolutions&FolderCTID=0x012000F83FD93BEFF45E4FB5D1769B01CA762F&View=%7BA709F322%2D0E67%2D45C7%2D932D%2DCB78C55CE268%7D"><span style=" font-size:12pt;color:#0082bf"><u>https://cwe.ccsds.org/sea/docs/Forms/AllItems.aspx?RootFolder=%2Fsea%2Fdocs%2FSEA%2DSA%2FDraft%20Documents%2FApp%20%2D%20Support%20Layer%20Green%20Book%2FASL%20ADD%20Review%20inputs%20%2D%20resolutions&FolderCTID=0x012000F83FD93BEFF45E4FB5D1769B01CA762F&View=%7BA709F322%2D0E67%2D45C7%2D932D%2DCB78C55CE268%7D</u></span></a></p>
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<p style="PýıFýıÇ(´;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">The
final copy of that tracking spreadsheet is attached here so that you can
easily determine the status of your PIDs and/or RIDs. All of the
raw and transcribed RID & PID files, in various states of completion
, are also in that folder.</span></p>
<p style="PýıFýıÇ(´;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"> </span></p>
<p style="PýıFýıÇ(´;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">All
of the changes to this document, as you will see from the raw, track changes,
version of the Word doc are extensive in scope. There is hardly a
page that did not get touched. That said, these changes, for all
their breadth, are not "deep". They are largely editorial
and for clarity rather than to effect any substantive change in meaning
or scope. However, because of their extent we do not think it appropriate
to just ask to send this directly to publication. Accordingly, we
are asking that the SEA SAWG, and the reviewers who submitted PIDs or RIDs,
review this final document and either concur with the changes, as made,
or request further clarifications/adjustments.</span></p>
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<p style="PýıFýıÇ(´;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt"><b><i>We
ask that you provide a response no later than two weeks from today, close
of business, West Coast time, 7 July 2020.</i></b> If you do have
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<p style="PýıFýıÇ(´;margin-Bottom:0px"><span style=" font-size:12pt">Thanks
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