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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Dear CESG Members:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Conditions for approval of CESG-P-2017-07-004 Approval to release CCSDS 921.2-R-1, Guidelines for Specifications of Cross Support Transfer Services (Red Book, Issue 1) for CCSDS Agency review have been resolved to the satisfaction of the ADs who voted to approve with conditions. The Secretariat will now proceed with CMC polling.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div style='mso-element:para-border-div;border:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in 0in 1.0pt 0in'><p class=MsoNormal style='border:none;padding:0in'><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Thomas Gannett<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net">thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</a><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>+1 443 472 0805<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> </span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> [</span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>] <br><b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, October 11, 2017 4:43 AM<br><b>To:</b> </span><a href="mailto:thomas.gannett@tgannett.net"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>thomas.gannett@tgannett.net</span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'><br><b>Cc:</b> Barkley, Erik; </span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>wo_._he@t-online.de</span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>; </span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'><br><b>Subject:</b> Fw: Draft responses to your CSTS "Guidelines" PIDs and comments<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Dear Tom,</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>after a long processing time, it appears that the PIDs that were raised to "CSTS Guidelines" (CCSDS 921.2-R-0) at the CESG Poll, have been resolved.</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>1) PIDs which were raised by SEA AD , have all but one been turned into modifications to the text.</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>For the remaining one, it is agreed that this will be addressed at the The Hague meeting, and will possibly be turned into a RID to be submitted during Agency Review</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>2) PIDs which were raise by MOIMS AD have been discussed and agreed with the originator. Please see Mario's email from 5th October.</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Given the above, we assume that the "Guidelines " book can now proceed towards Agency Review as RED-1 .</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>I attach hereto the updated version.</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Thank you, kind regards,</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Margherita</span> <br><br><br><br><br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>--------------------------------------------------------------<br></span><b><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#00A1E0'>Margherita di Giulio</span></b> <br><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F'>Ground Station Back-end Section (OPS-GIB)<br></span><br><b><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F'>European Space Agency ESA/ESOC</span></b><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F'><br>Robert-Bosch-Str. 5<br>D-64293 Darmstadt - Germany<br>Tel: +49-6151-902779<br>e-mail: </span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"'>Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F'><br><br></span><br><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:purple'>----- Forwarded by Margherita di Giulio/esoc/ESA on 11/10/2017 10:15 -----</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F'>From: </span><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>"Shames, Peter M (312B)" <</span><a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>></span> <br><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F'>To: </span><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>"</span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>wo_._he@t-online.de</span></a><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>" <</span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>wo_._he@t-online.de</span></a><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>></span> <br><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F'>Cc: </span><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>"</span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>" <</span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>>, "</span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>" <</span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>></span> <br><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F'>Date: </span><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>09/10/2017 18:21</span> <br><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:#5F5F5F'>Subject: </span><span style='font-size:7.5pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Re: Draft responses to your CSTS "Guidelines" PIDs and comments</span> <o:p></o:p></p><div class=MsoNormal align=center style='text-align:center'><hr size=2 width="100%" noshade style='color:#A0A0A0' align=center></div><p class=MsoNormal><br><br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Hi Wolfgang,</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>In principle, I am completely against having CESG PIDs shuffled off and treated as agency reviews inputs. They are entirely different in nature and intent.</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>That said, in the case of item 16, which is related to use of the SANA registries, I do understand that this will require some further discussion and that it is also a topic that will be in the "don't care" or "I don't understand this" category for most agency reviewers. My proposed resolution is that we agree to work this during the meeting in the Hague and agree to document the outcome of that discussion in WG revisions to the document following the agency review. If you wish to memorialize that agreement as an "Agency RID" that is your call.</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>With that agreement I concur with releasing the document for review.</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Thanks, Peter</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>From: </span></b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Wolfgang Hell <</span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>wo_._he@t-online.de</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>><b><br>Reply-To: </b>Wolfgang Hell <</span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>wo_._he@t-online.de</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>><b><br>Date: </b>Monday, October 9, 2017 at 5:42 AM<b><br>To: </b>Peter Shames <</span><a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>><b><br>Cc: </b>"</span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>" <</span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>>, "</span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>" <</span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>><b><br>Subject: </b>Fwd: Re: Draft responses to your CSTS "Guidelines" PIDs and comments</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <o:p></o:p></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Hi Peter,</span> <o:p></o:p></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I understand from Margherita that she discussed my proposed responses to the MOIMS PIDs with Mario and that those responses clarified the issues so that based on that those PIDs can be retired.</span> <o:p></o:p></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Given that we would like to proceed with getting the "Guidelines" published as Red-1 for Agency review. However, to that end we also would like to come to a conclusion regarding your PIDs and comments. Can you please let us know if you are okay with us going ahead with the publication of that book in accordance with the understanding that I had outlined in the email below?</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Thanks and best regards,<br><br>Wolfgang<br><br>-------- Weitergeleitete Nachricht -------- </span><o:p></o:p></p><table class=MsoNormalTable border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0 width=887 style='width:665.25pt;border-collapse:collapse'><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=124 valign=top style='width:93.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Betreff: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=763 style='width:572.25pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Re: Draft responses to your CSTS "Guidelines" PIDs and comments</span> <o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=124 valign=top style='width:93.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Datum: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=763 style='width:572.25pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Thu, 21 Sep 2017 09:31:49 +0200</span> <o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=124 valign=top style='width:93.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Von: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=763 style='width:572.25pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Wolfgang Hell </span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><wo_._he@t-online.de></span></a> <span lang=DE><o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=124 valign=top style='width:93.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Antwort an: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=763 style='width:572.25pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>wo_._he@t-online.de</span></a> <o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=124 valign=top style='width:93.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>An: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=763 style='width:572.25pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Shames, Peter M (312B) </span><a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov></span></a> <o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=124 valign=top style='width:93.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Kopie (CC): </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=763 style='width:572.25pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int></span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>, </span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int></span></a><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr></table><p><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Hi Peter,<br><br>Thank you for your feedback. Please find attached the updated Guidelines document where I believe that the changes close Ref-No. 1 and 2, 4 to 8, 11, 14 and 15 of the SEA PIDs / comments spreadsheet. <br><br>Regarding Ref-No. 3, 9 and 10 I agree that this is a terminology issue. The reason why we opted for the term "abstract" rather than "generic" is that the purpose of an abstract procedure or service is similar to an abstract class in object-oriented programming. Both are there not for being used as such but for inheritance because they represent commonly needed functions or interaction patterns. Therefore I would prefer to retain the term "abstract". In addition, this terminology has been used in the already published Framework document and deviating from that now in the Guidelines would be confusing or require updating of the Framework.<br><br>Regarding Ref-No. 12, your response shows that we have not been clear enough in the Guidelines because your proposed text isn't the message we wanted to get across. I therefore tweaked the language a bit and hope that now the point is clear. Please note also that a procedure derived from a service-original (individual) procedure should not be referred to as individual procedure because it was not created starting from scratch.<br><br>Regarding Ref-No. 13, we could identify one procedure in the figures in section 2 as being the prime procedure (type). But the selection of that procedure type would be somewhat arbitrary and the prime procedure concept is not the topic being discussed in section 2 and therefore showing prime procedures in those figures might be more confusing than helpful. But to help the reader, I have added a cross reference to 3.1.2 b) pointing to the definition of the term "prime procedure instance".<br><br>Regarding Ref-No. 16, I'll be happy to add such material, but I'm not fully clear what exactly you would like to see added here. Probably the most efficient way for sorting this out is that we talk about it at the The Hague meeting. However, I would not like to delay the processing of the Guidelines book more than necessary. Would you be willing to retire your comment at this point and we then inject the additional material by means of a RID raised as part of the Red-1 review?<br><br>Best regards,<br>Wolfgang<br><br><br><br>Am 20.09.2017 um 02:34 schrieb Shames, Peter M (312B):</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Hi Wolfgang,</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Sorry for the delay in responding to this request. As you note, it came in when I was on vacation and it seems I was not diligent in mining the backlog for items that needed to be addressed.</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Attached are my responses. There are a few remaining things that I think we can easily clean up.</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Best regards, Peter</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>From: </span></b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Wolfgang Hell </span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><wo_._he@t-online.de></span></a><b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><br>Reply-To: </span></b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Wolfgang Hell </span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><wo_._he@t-online.de></span></a><b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><br>Date: </span></b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Tuesday, September 19, 2017 at 1:57 AM<b><br>To: </b>Peter Shames </span><a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov></span></a><b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><br>Cc: </span></b><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>"Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int></span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>, </span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>"Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"</span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int></span></a><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>, Wolfgang Hell </span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><wo_._he@t-online.de></span></a><b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><br>Subject: </span></b><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Fwd: Draft responses to your CSTS "Guidelines" PIDs and comments</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <o:p></o:p></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Dear Peter,</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>as the automatic reply that I received when I had sent you the email below told me you were on vacation at the time. Did you get the chance in the meantime to have a look at the responses to your comments on the CSTS Guidelines document? Next week we'll have a CSTS WG telecon and therefore it would be useful to have a feeling about the effort it will take to update the Guidelines document as needed (regardless of the color the book will have in the end). <br><br>Thank you in advance for taking a look at this.<br><br>Best regards,<br>Wolfgang</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><br>-------- Weitergeleitete Nachricht -------- </span><o:p></o:p></p><table class=MsoNormalTable border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0 width=1444 style='width:1083.0pt;border-collapse:collapse'><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=172 valign=top style='width:129.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Betreff: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=1272 style='width:13.25in;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Draft responses to your CSTS "Guidelines" PIDs and comments</span> <o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=172 valign=top style='width:129.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Datum: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=1272 style='width:13.25in;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Wed, 30 Aug 2017 17:06:03 +0200</span> <o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=172 valign=top style='width:129.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Von: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=1272 style='width:13.25in;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Wolfgang Hell </span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><wo_._he@t-online.de></span></a> <span lang=DE><o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=172 valign=top style='width:129.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Antwort an: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=1272 style='width:13.25in;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>wo_._he@t-online.de</span></a> <o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=172 valign=top style='width:129.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>An: </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=1272 style='width:13.25in;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Shames, Peter M (312B) </span><a href="mailto:peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov"><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><peter.m.shames@jpl.nasa.gov></span></a> <o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr style='height:6.0pt'><td width=172 valign=top style='width:129.0pt;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal align=right style='text-align:right;mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Kopie (CC): </span></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=1272 style='width:13.25in;padding:0in 0in 0in 0in;height:6.0pt'><p class=MsoNormal style='mso-line-height-alt:6.0pt'><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span><a href="mailto:Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int"><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><Margherita.di.Giulio@esa.int></span></a><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>, </span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int</span></a><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span><a href="mailto:Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int"><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><Holger.Dreihahn@esa.int></span></a><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>, Barkley, Erik J (3970) </span><a href="mailto:erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov"><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><erik.j.barkley@jpl.nasa.gov></span></a><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>, </span><a href="mailto:wo_._he@t-online.de"><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>wo_._he@t-online.de</span></a><span lang=DE><o:p></o:p></span></p></td></tr></table><p><span lang=DE><br></span><span lang=DE style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span><span lang=DE> <br></span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Dear Peter,</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>please find attached a spreadsheet with the draft responses to the PID </span><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>and comments regarding 921x2. I realize that the "Magenta vs Yellow" </span><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>discussion may require a dedicated discussion, but regardless I wanted </span><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>to share my thoughts on that topic with you (Ref.-No. 1). For the other </span><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>items I expect that we can fairly easily come to an agreement. The only </span><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>exception in this respect may be Ref.-No. 11, where unfortunately I fail </span><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>to understand what you are proposing.</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Best regards,</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'>Wolfgang</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'> </span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Courier New"'> </span> <o:p></o:p></p><p><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> </span> <o:p></o:p></p><pre>This message and any attachments are intended for the use of the addressee or addressees only.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>The unauthorised disclosure, use, dissemination or copying (either in whole or in part) of its<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>content is not permitted.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>If you received this message in error, please notify the sender and delete it from your system.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre>Emails can be altered and their integrity cannot be guaranteed by the sender.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre><pre>Please consider the environment before printing this email.<o:p></o:p></pre><pre><o:p> </o:p></pre></div></body></html>