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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Made most of the fixes per comments. I also have a few minor changes from Dave that have been added (main one is in paragraph 7.4) and others that mostly match
your comments. Will submit this doc as errata and will make new PDF.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I will also submit a slight edit of the xmi and mdzip files to reflect the changes to the documentation.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I am including the errata doc and new inventory in this email and will update PDF, XMI, inventory and errata with Jurgen.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> Manfred Koethe <koethe@88solutions.com>
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<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, September 23, 2021 2:52 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> BROOKSHIER Daniel <Daniel.BROOKSHIER@3ds.com><br>
<b>Cc:</b> space@omg.org; ab@omg.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Initial AB Review of the Cube Sat Reference Model submission<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Here is my initial AB review of the Cube Sat Reference Model<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Before I start ....<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">This has come a loooooooooong way and is now looking really nice, thanks to Daniel's substantial effort! Thank you!<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">A. Machine Readable Files<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The XMI looks fine.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">B. Inventory<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The version stamps of the URLs look wrong. The XMI defines a version stamp of "20210801" in the CSRM URL, but the Inventory uses "20210501". This should be updated to "20210801"<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">[ luckily for me, I found at least one error :-) ]<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">C. Document<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">- The font of all the «stereotype» mentionings is not consistent. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D;background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">Think this is good now. Reapplied the normal paragraph and lists</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">
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<p class="MsoNormal">- Throughout the document, please insert a blank line after the "Gneralization" bulleted lists.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">These, and most of my other comments are EDITORIAL, but I suggeste to fix at Beta-1 publishing the latest, as it would be a real pain to fix in FTF.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">You need to discuss the front page with Michelle and Jason, lots of things are in flux there. But I guess there will be a lot more changes until the FTF is over....<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The OMG address in "Preface - Restricted Rights Legend" needs updating [This is an OMG Template Error]<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red;background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">Will fix in FTF as none of this has changed in the current template. Need to fix logo then too.</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">In 7.1.3 MissionNeed - Insert a space between «Mission» and "or by one or more ..."<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">In 7.1.9 ComponentRequirement - shluld the «component» at the end of the first line be capitalized? («Component»)?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">In 7.1.11 SpaceSegmentRequirement - Inconsitent font size throughout the paragraph.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">In 7.4.2 Validation - The formating of the "Parameters" list looks odd.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D;background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">Not sure what the issues are. I did update this with the latest bulleted paragraph formatting.</span><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">D. Final Question<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Can a Cube Sat be round …….. ?? ;-)<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span><span style="color:#1F497D;background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow">See also:
<a href="https://www.tennessean.com/story/news/2015/03/13/pi-day-events-nashville/70299782/">
https://www.tennessean.com/story/news/2015/03/13/pi-day-events-nashville/70299782/</a></span><span style="color:#1F497D">
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<p class="MsoNormal">Manfred<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">____________________<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Manfred Koethe<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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